Flash Fiction: Torn World Muse Fusion Freebie

[wyld_dandelyon]

We had company last night; once they headed to bed I sat down to write and fell asleep instead; as a result, I got a slow start in this Muse Fusion. Then, of course, the first idea that really grabbed me will take a little while to complete. But the first scene works well as flash fiction, I think. I look forward to your comments

Comments

[anonymous]

There's a city ordinance in Orlando, FL that limits and requires a permit to feed large groups. A humanitarian group has been fighting in court what they see as an unjust law. Some members have been arrested for defying the law and feeding the hungry/homeless in a downtown park.

[wyld_dandelyon]

The "unjust law" thing is more likely to work here than in the Empire, where you need a license for just about everything. The rationalization here is that the Empire wants people trained to make such contact so it's done right.

Thanks for stopping by!

[red_trillium]

Aw, that's a sweet story. I haven't read some of the Torn World in awhile. I know I need to go back and do some reading.

[wyld_dandelyon]

Thank you. You're welcome to stop by the website any time.

[ext_673009]

I like how the licensing plays into the world. It creates a dark gritty feel.

[wyld_dandelyon]

Thank you. I can't take the blame for the Empire licensing everything, but it is a fascinating part of the world, and as a writer, a challenge too.

Sad yet sweet

[anonymous]

That is quite a touching story in what appears to be a very cruel world. At least Osatha is doing what she can working within the limits of what she can get away with. Love the atmosphere cast here, and your names are wonderful. Nice stuff.
~jon
www.madutopia.com

Re: Sad yet sweet

[wyld_dandelyon]

Thank you.

I expect every world has good points and bad ones. The Empire's licensing laws are ubiquitous; they serve many of the same purposes as taxes, but also provide a structure for an orderly life and a prosperous nation. With every story that deals with them, they're an interesting challenge for me as a speculative fiction writer.

Wonderful work Deidre!

[ext_210743]

Deidre, I love everything about this, but especially the dialogue and the way you clearly show us their emotions. Fantastic work!

Re: Wonderful work Deidre!

[wyld_dandelyon]

Thank you!