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wwonder

Fanfic: The Rain

Aug 01, 2008 17:07

Title: The Rain
Fandom: Twilight
Character/Pairing: Alice, Alice/Jasper
Rating: PG
Summary: She's waiting for someone.
Disclaimer: The characters do not belong to me.
Notes: Posting my finished fics before Breaking Dawn

( she looks wistful when she disappears through the door and into the night. )

fanfiction, alice/jasper, twilight

Comments 5

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wwonder August 4 2008, 19:56:09 UTC

ooh, wow! that's really cool. :D

glitterdragon August 4 2008, 19:11:56 UTC

I love them.. *sighs* Alice and Jazz just work.

wm_law2003 August 4 2008, 19:49:53 UTC

That was really nice. I liked that the POV was neither Alice nor Jasper. Good twist!

train_lindz August 5 2008, 01:14:08 UTC

Oh this is lovely :) I love the image of her just sitting there, waiting for him to walk into her life. Beautifully structured piece.

Well done!

keeper_of_stars August 5 2008, 05:01:29 UTC

That's really lovely. Their story is so intriguing and you captured it wonderfully.