Comments | wusai: Krum 'n Hermione Fic

wusai

Krum 'n Hermione Fic

Nov 22, 2005 19:36

So I've come to a block-to continue, to finish, to continue but cut some of the parts…? I mean, a couple of the scenes could stand as a decent fic on their own, but something just feels like it's missing ( Read more... )

hermione granger, viktor krum, krum x hermione, unfinished, harry potter

Comments 9

yukitsu November 23 2005, 13:20:25 UTC

I thought it was lovely. I can't really say if Krum was in character, but I thought you managed to give him a personality and made him seem human. Hee hee.

It was funny, too. XD The stuff in the parentheses were nice additions.

wusai November 26 2005, 02:55:59 UTC

Thanks for the feedback :D Well, I was rereading the scenes with Krum in it and taking notes (I had too much time), and I realized that he's actually a lot more jealous and possessive (and stubborn) than I thought. The movie sure makes him look like a sweet, charming guy XD

I just need to figure out what to cut, what to keep, etc…hmm.

Wusai

yukitsu November 26 2005, 14:59:55 UTC

.. I didn't even notice him much in the movie. o_o He was just... there. >_>;;

*realizes that it's probably because she had been too busy keeping an eye out for yaoi*

wusai November 28 2005, 04:30:06 UTC

Hahaha I thought the ending was hilarious (and my friend told me later that she was laughing her butt off):

Voldemort: "And now . . . I can TOUCH you."
Fangirls: "OMG!!!111!!@@@!!one!!!!
Voldemort: "And I will BREAK you."
Fangirls: "ZOMG!!!@@!!!"
Voldemort: *touches Harry*
Fangirls: "OMG hear that?!??!/1//1 HE'S ORGASMING WITH THE SLIGHTEST TOUCH OF HARRY!!!!!!!"
Canon sticklers: " . . . no, he's in pain . . . "
Fangirls: "That's 'cause he likes it like that! Duh!"

Bet you loved it when Malfoy went down Crabbe/Goyle's (I can't remember which one it was) pants. ;)

Wusai

Thread 5

_rednovember December 4 2005, 08:45:02 UTC

I have never read a Krum/Hermione fic before (it's totally undrrated) but I must say you have me hopeful!

Wonderful short story--I love the 1st Person POV from Krum.

wusai December 5 2005, 02:10:02 UTC

Thanks for the compliments :) and I find Krum/Hermione something fun to experiment with. It always ends in a bittersweet way with me.

Wusai

VegetableWarlord? :D steel_breeze December 5 2005, 00:35:50 UTC

...I know VegetableWarlord. xD Small world.

Re: VegetableWarlord? :D wusai December 5 2005, 02:10:59 UTC

Zomg wow.

And you like Avatar too! Definitely a small world XD Do you know him IRL, or just online?

Wusai