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fallenmagic October 10 2009, 19:54:00 UTC
OH THAT WAS SO GOOD.

I loved how you touched upon Peter's meeting with Nathan because his behaviour towards him in the ep was off. Not returning his calls to then suddenly hugging him in the hospital? Peter's not that silly, I bet he knows something's going down.

But the Paire was gorgeous. All their interactions...*sigh*

And all I can think of as well is what Gretchen thinks watching all this xD

Well done hun <333

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wuhdemah October 11 2009, 02:54:00 UTC
LOL I know. xD Think of what any outsider would think! Poor Gretchen, she must be so confused. And Peter was totally off. It was beyond strange. Oh, Peter.

Thank you so much, Ellie. <33 I'm so glad you liked it.

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commen_sense October 11 2009, 02:43:25 UTC
i agree with ellie. peter's behaviour in this was much more fitting. I thought it was incredibly wierd how PEter didnt immediately think of Sylar when Nathan displayed telekenisis. but now this makes me sad since you've shown a very canon reaction to peter finding somethings wrong with nathan, i cant help think of how broken he'll be when he finds out that his brother is tead *cries*

but coming back to the fic, it was gorgeous, as usual. Good luck on the challenge :)

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wuhdemah October 11 2009, 02:55:12 UTC
I knowww. I am not looking forward to that revelation. Just... Peter. :( I hate sad Peter because I just want to hug him and I can't. Darn TV screen is in the way.

Thanks, bb. <3 I'm glad you liked it. Good luck to you too! :D

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paynesgrey October 11 2009, 13:22:43 UTC
That's fantastic! I'm glad you portrayed Peter as more suspicious and worried for Nathan's abilities, and Claire's reaction was fitting as well. A very sweet ending too. Great work.

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wuhdemah October 12 2009, 16:51:38 UTC
Thank you so much! :D I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

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bellonablack October 12 2009, 03:50:11 UTC
"It’s just you, Claire, okay?"

This line is so them. I like how they've evolved, and I like how he's opening up to Claire. Sometimes he takes too much on his shoulders. And that they try to have a moment of normalcy. Love it. :-)

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wuhdemah October 12 2009, 16:52:33 UTC
Thank you! :D I'm glad you liked it. :)

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