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FF: Nightmare 2

Sep 10, 2007 01:07

Title: Nightmare ( Read more... )

Comments 15

joulez217 September 9 2007, 16:15:07 UTC

I can't for the life of me remember if I'd left a comment for part 1 or not?? Well I know I read it, but I like this part as well.

There is a small spelling mistake, 8th paragraph down, after the two lines of speech. You spelt Ianto wrong! Just thought you'd like to know.

But I liked this, there gonna be more??

wscaster September 9 2007, 16:20:06 UTC

Thanks for the heads up for the Ianto miss spell, thought I'd caught all those little buggers, guess not! lol

Yes there will be more, just gotta get it written, like I said, this quick little fic that's been bouncing around my head has taken on a life of it's own and it keeps growing!

joulez217 September 9 2007, 16:30:53 UTC

I don't think anyone catches everything, not even if you have a Beta. Not to worry though. :)

And cool, I look forward to more. I really need to start another WIP for myself, I mainly write one shots. Still great part, looking forward to more. :D

tiggerbrasilf September 9 2007, 16:34:51 UTC

This is really dramatic! It'll be nice to see more (:

tanarian September 9 2007, 16:39:15 UTC

Speaking for myself, I adore Countrycide fics and plan two more of my own, so I sure as hell hope that they haven't beeen done to death! *grin* And this is a good one, with you taking your time to build it up nicely and pulling in the other characters, as well (which I have to admit that I'm not always that good at!).

One tiny observation? At the end of the eighth paragraph, that starts with From the moment that he’d seen Ianto being held there with the cleaver at his throat: I think you probably meant to use the word colleague rather than college? Proper word, so the spellchecker wouldn't catch it. Not trying to be nitpicky, 'cos I know how devious those little buggers are, but I did smile at the idea of Ianto teaching Owen all he knows...

wscaster September 9 2007, 16:46:48 UTC

thanks for the correction, and Ianto teaching Owen all he knows? Well now thats a whole other fic, and one that I don't think i'll be taking up...unless it's Ianto teaching Owen how to be sneaky, and that could be interesting.....mmmmmmmmmmmm kill that plot bunny now!!!!

tanarian September 9 2007, 16:52:03 UTC

*laugh* Owen would be a terrible student, but I'm not killing that bunny, just shoo-ing it in your direction!

jigot September 9 2007, 20:10:11 UTC

This is wonderful. Glad the plot bunny kept biting :)

fair_vatican September 10 2007, 08:23:57 UTC

i really like this story.

is there going to be a third part?

wscaster September 10 2007, 10:43:51 UTC

yes the third part is in my head, just gotta find the time to get it to the comp :o) Hopefully it will be done soon!