Away in the Woods (1/?)

Nov 08, 2011 12:54

Title: Away in the Woods
Author: wrldpossibility
Fandom: Castle
Characters: Castle/Beckett
Word Count: 2000
Rating: PG (so far)
Spoilers: For S4
Summary: Beckett and Castle are banished to her father's cabin in the woods. Alone. For days. Make of that what you will.
Author's Note: This is just for fun, fun, fun. No precise time period it's meant to fit into; just ( Read more... )

castle, away in the woods

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wrldpossibility November 9 2011, 03:02:40 UTC
Great! Thank you for taking the time to say so.

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notice___me November 9 2011, 03:25:49 UTC
Love this idea. Can't wait to read more :)

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wrldpossibility November 9 2011, 06:08:33 UTC
Thank you!

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fading_ripples November 9 2011, 10:02:03 UTC
Yay, can't wait to read the rest! :D

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wrldpossibility November 9 2011, 14:02:22 UTC
Thanks!

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ghostwriterlost November 9 2011, 17:05:43 UTC
Castle taking an italian leather hardsided suitcase crammed with clothes to a cabin by the lake? How very Castle. His saying 'city boy' later was redundant.

I really like this exchange:
“Some of my happiest memories are here.”

There’s a pause while Castle mulls this over, but when he answers her, his voice is still light. “I’ll try not to ruin it.”

Looking forward to where you take this.

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wrldpossibility November 9 2011, 20:36:46 UTC
Thanks so much! Glad you appreciate the city boy stuff. ;)

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bluewillowtree November 9 2011, 22:12:55 UTC
Ooh, this is fun so far, and I'm very much looking forward to reading what happens next! This part in particular made me smile:

They make short work of it, cruising up and down the empty aisles for bread, cereal, and milk, and brie, water crackers, and filet mignon, respectively. It’s a curiously intimate experience, divvying up their scrawled list, deciding what they might eat-together-for breakfast tomorrow, lunch, dinner, then likely breakfast again after that.

It's a great balance between funny and UST-ish :)

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wrldpossibility November 9 2011, 22:21:30 UTC
Thank you! So glad you're reading!

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