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Joss100 Challenge: Ficlet # 8 - Hate

Nov 07, 2005 23:00

Okay, here is number eight for the Joss100 fic challenge. This is the only thing I managed to complete today, as I started back at speech therapy this morning. Hopefully, I will have a new 'Little Things' story by Wednesday morning, for those of you wondering. In the meantime, there is this. I know it's not River/Jayne but what can I do about it ( Read more... )

joss100, firefly, mal/river

Comments 8

madjm November 8 2005, 07:36:09 UTC

There's no way he can stop himself. :) It's way too late for that. Poor Mal. The change in the coffee routine was just a sign of his downfall. :)

vikingwriter November 8 2005, 13:41:50 UTC

Ooooooh. You are an evil wench. I was on the fence about this pair, but really liked the pieces regardless. But now...

He smiles at her when he enters the kitchen tonight and realizes he hates himself for not being strong enough to stay away.

*shivers*

thanks

meinterrupted November 8 2005, 15:25:46 UTC

Oh, this is so good. He needs her, he wants her, and he hates himself for wanting her, but he can't help himself. The crazy is attractive. :)

srichard November 8 2005, 16:59:37 UTC

Mmm...I really like the little nightly coffee ritual. Very sweet.

rinalin November 9 2005, 01:32:14 UTC

*Melts*

Yay for Mal/River! I love them together. Poor Mal, dont stand a chance.