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beanrua November 1 2005, 16:33:17 UTC
YAY!

As always, I adore it.

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writwritewrote November 1 2005, 20:23:11 UTC
Thank you. I aim to please.

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redcandle17 November 1 2005, 16:46:08 UTC
The first scene = extremely hot. The last scene = extremely sweet. Loved it.

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writwritewrote November 1 2005, 20:24:05 UTC
*blushes* And I love you, for continuing to use that icon. I love Elliot Stable / Chris Meloni. LOVE. HIM.

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geek6 November 1 2005, 17:03:47 UTC
you got the balance of hot and sweet.. just exactly perfect..

and bring out Jaynes inner secret softy (well maybe not so secret anymore!)wonderfully..

thank you..

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writwritewrote November 1 2005, 20:25:00 UTC
Geek - thank you. I'm so glad you're becoming a convert to the awesomeness that is RAYNE. *and Firefly, of course*

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feylin17 November 1 2005, 17:51:19 UTC
Horray! This gets better every time you update. :)

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writwritewrote November 1 2005, 20:26:13 UTC
That's very nice of you to say so - I'm always sort of nervouse everytime I post a new part - ask my beta. I'm always asking her if it's alright, or if I should just scrap and start over. I'm glad she's giving me good advice.

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writwritewrote November 1 2005, 20:27:04 UTC
Thank you. I try to keep with a schedule, because I am super organized. *snickers*

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