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fic: Be Still My Beating Heart (1/?)

Mar 31, 2010 22:44

Title: Be Still My Beating Heart
Author: writteninhaste
Rating: NC-17
Warnings/Spoilers: dub-con/non-con. Violence. Explicit sexual situations.
Summary: We know that fear is fed off shadows; just as shadows feed off fear. They swell, and bleed and grow together - feeding one another even as they seek to devour our very souls. Fear needs only a little darkness ( Read more... )

pairing: kirk/mccoy, pairing: pike/mccoy, genre: drama, genre: action/adventure, fanfic, fanfiction, genre: au, pairing: pike/kirk, author: writteninhaste, warning: non-con, character: mccoy, rating: nc-17, character: kirk, warning: dub-con, type: slash, genre: angst, length: multiparter, character: pike

Comments 21

Author Note writteninhaste March 31 2010, 21:53:04 UTC

This fic is in serious need of a Beta as people are slipping seriously OOC (even for an AU) and my usual Beta's aren't ST fans, so if anyone's interested, please let me know. Thanks.

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Re: Author Note writteninhaste April 1 2010, 08:00:24 UTC

In a wolf pack, the Omega wolf is the lowest ranking wolf in the hierarchy - the one that gets tormented and picked on by all the others. However, I'm twisting it in my verse because I &heart McCoy so I'm going to be selfish and keep the exact nature of an Omega secret for now (though there is a clue in this chapter already). Glad you like the fic.

blcwriter March 31 2010, 22:23:40 UTC

This is a fascinating start ... and I don't think the characters are necessarily OOC at all. Pike's more than a bit of a cipher, though yes, you've written him as very dark here.

I really, really enjoy this.

freelancetitan March 31 2010, 22:47:16 UTC

Oh my.
Unfortunatly I can't beta but wow. I'm so keeping my eyes open for an update. This just made my week. Scrtch that this month. Even if the character do turn oocish this is well written and you 've got an interesting power dynamic going.

d8rkmessngr March 31 2010, 23:07:16 UTC

Hm, not necessarily OOC per say. The premise is off to a good start and the characters we know in canon have shifted (pun intended, lol) to suit the AU verse. I'm intrigued. :)

Willing to Beta read halfdreaming April 1 2010, 01:31:18 UTC

I don't often offer (because omg BUSY), but I'd be happy to beta read for you, if you'd like. I'm good at helping people beat their plot bunnies into submission (or hang on for the ride when the plot bunny tries to take over their brain). I'm a fan of ST though by no means a trekkie (that would be my mother), and I really like what you're doing with this AU. I feel like the character most in danger of being OOC would be Pike, but at this point I don't see too many issues. I will save my nitpicky comments for now, unless you want them, however! Anyway, fascinating universe here and I look forward to seeing more.