fic: Never Drive Faster Than Your Guardian Angel Can Fly 2/?

[writteninhaste]

Title: Never Drive Faster Than Your Guardian Angel Can Fly 2/?
Author: writteninhaste previously feathergirl89
Rating: Currently G but no doubt this will drastically increase in later chapters
Warnings/Spoilers: Spoilers for Season 1
Summary: Merlin was in heaven, minding his own business, when he was told he was to become the guardian angel of Arthur Pendragon. Written for rane_ab

Comments

[crazypenguin03]

hehehe, cute. I'm liking this story quite a lot so far!

One typo, though:“Yes. I am. You’re guardian angel to be exact.” "you're" should be "your" there. It's just that your/you're, there/they're/their and to/two/too are kinda pet-peeves of mine.

[pippopippo]

Lovely! :)

[mossylawn]

Merlin is the most hilarious and hapless angel possible.
“I said I lost it, alright?” Merlin said, forgetting to be afraid in the face of his annoyance. “I was flying, and I wasn’t looking where I was going, and I bumped into a storm cloud and the blasted thing fell off. So I don’t have a halo. Not until the Dominions see fit to issue me a new one.”
This bit had me in stitches. Because only Merlin could do it!
Poor Arthur must be wondering why he didn't get a 'top shelf' angel instead of this practically disabled one. Also I really want Arthur to stroke Merlin's wings and make the feather's just right ;)

[ninjaboots]

This is lovely! I was giggling most of the way through this--Merlin and Gwen as guardian angels is just too perfect, and they're both so in character. I admit, I'm somewhat interested to see how Morgana's gift plays out... I wouldn't be all that surprised if she could see angels as well, given that she is a powerful seer.

And I completely second the idea of having Arthur touch Merlin's wings. I rather think Merlin would enjoy it more than he would altogether want to.

[_profiterole_]

OMG, he lost his halo! XDDD Why am I not surprised?

Also, it's cute that he can't get away from Arthur. :-)