Play On

[written_notes]

Title: Play On
Sequel to: If Music Be the Food of Love - I recommend you read this first, or else this one will be confusing

Comments

[twiggyrocks2815]

I enjoyed it just as much as the original story ^_^ Just the right amount of cheesiness for a new couple, I think. I liked the bit where Amber mentions the joke about Henry mistaking Donghae for her, because I feel like that jokes like that would be a legitimate concern for them. Anyway, very good!

[written_notes]

ah, the scene with Henber discussing that was the last one I added in, and I hoped it would come across as an issue that wasn't too 'out there'. but it was all secretly an excuse for more fluff!

thanks for reading and commenting!

[kaijin_taichou]

"Wait, so you like Amber...?" I don't know what's wrong with me but I laughed when I read it. >_< Eunhae is ♥♥♥♥. :)

And Amber questioning Henry's, uhm, sexuality? LOL!

Thanks for writing a sequel! ^_^

P.S. I love Sungmin here!!! So much love for him and his humor! :)

[written_notes]

lol, I guess clueless!Donghae is quite funny XD

and I think considering how many of the boys in this story aren't as straight as a ruler, it's a legit question for Amber to have, haha!

I'm glad you liked Sungmin in this! I always feel a bit unsure about how to write him.

thanks for reading and commenting!

[kaijin_taichou]

Can I just add that this is my favorite scene?

Henry surveyed his and Donghae’s room. “It’s exactly the same as yours, hyung. Just without Eunhyukkie and his gay porn.”

Sungmin chuckled, while the twins looked surprised. “Excuse me, gay porn?” Amber echoed, not wanting to believe that her dancing friend actually gave in to his baser urges.

A very innocent Henry. A very scandalized Amber. A surprised Donghae. And a happy Sungmin. *sobs*

[rizaisinair]

cheesy but cute :)

LOL at Sungmin's 'roommate' XDXD

[written_notes]

Sungmin knows everything about his roommate *nods seriously*

glad you found it cute despite overwhelming cheesiness!

thanks for reading and commenting!

[cleonhart]

I love the way you write Eunhae asghdfjg I have no idea if this is just a one shot but I'd probably cry in happiness if you keep going with this agsdhfjghkl;

[written_notes]

aww, I'm glad you liked it. I think this is just a oneshot sequel for my previous series, so I don't have any ideas about how to continue the story at the moment. maybe you can check out my other Eunhae stories? haha.

thanks for reading and commenting!