The Week Before Valentine's [Chapter 3]

[written_notes]

Title: The Week Before Valentine's

Comments

What's there to criticize?

[chocolatefarm]

Haha, really I love this chapter.
I adore the way you are making my heart go pitter-patter with the tension leading up to the finale. OMGEE! I love Seungri. I think Big Bang doing Gee or Kissing You would be the best thing in the world...but wait Seungri was part of Boys Generation right? He did Kissing You and Girl's Generation with Jo Kwon Taemin Shindong and Sungmin didn't he? Oh my gosh I just remember this, must go find the truth on youtube haha
But yes, back to your sotry. I love it. It's amazing. I love how you're portraying the main characters. I can't wait for the next chapter! Wooh!

Re: What's there to criticize?

[written_notes]

wow, I forgot about Seungri's apppearance in Boy's Generation too! Let's just assume he's thinking of Big Bang doing such a performance as a group! *must find convenient excuse for plothole*

thanks for commenting so quickly!!

Re: What's there to criticize?

[chocolatefarm]

No problem. I love this fic.
And I got the name wrong, it was Wonderboys lol

Re: What's there to criticize?

[written_notes]

oh right, Wonderboys! Boy's Generation was the group that did Gee, with Jaebum, Taecyeon, Nickhun, Yesung, Shindong, Sungmin, Eunhyuk, Key and Jo Kwon!

[minamelody]

hulllo~ i've just read the 3 chapters right now and i just want to say that i am really loving it so far (:
you have great style of writing. it's really nice! thanks so much for sharing, looking forward to the rest! <3

[written_notes]

thank you so much for your encouraging comment! I don't really even know what my writing style is...haha!

thanks for reading!

[written_notes]

maybe it would be like Gee in an ultra-low voice! I really like TOP too!

thanks for always reading and commenting!!

[daesung_fanatic]

Aigoo...so short

but seungri ish cute in this ^_^

[written_notes]

I promise the next chapter will be more than twice as long as this one!

thanks for faithfully reading!

[daesung_fanatic]

Oh yay! LOLZ

and ur welcome ^_^

[kpop_fandom96]

Seungri! him bein attracted to seobaby's smile is something i can totally imagine :) but Top doing Gee? not so much :) gd chapter though :)

[written_notes]

yup, the idea is that TOP doing Gee is UNIMAGINABLE, haha!!

thanks for commenting!