If Music be the Food of Love [Chapter 4]

[written_notes]

Title: If Music be the Food of Love

Comments

[ranwae]

aakjdhfakjdf QMi have met! <3

lmao it's so funny how eunseo's appearance went with the plans of amber and mi XD good thing she didnt see amber XD

looking forward to the next chapter! thanks :)

[written_notes]

and funnily, the QMi meeting was unplanned as well!

and it all went well thanks to Amber's mad dodging skills :P

thanks for reading and commenting!

[rizaisinair]

yeah 2 score for Zhoumi <3 even if Eunseo wasn't in plan XD

[written_notes]

Zhoumi is a master planner! and an opportunist as we can see :)

thanks for reading and commenting!

[twiggyrocks2815]

I love this story so far. This chapter was hilarious, I was laughing out loud through the whole thing.

I think italicizing the Chinese parts could potentially be confusing, since you italicized things like talking through the mouthpiece and inner thoughts? But it could also work.

Anyway, really good story, I look forward to reading more!

[written_notes]

I think having readers laughing at the story is one of the highest compliments I can receive!

thanks for your input on the italicizing - though I normally italicize words of a different language, I realise for this fic they'll be speaking some English too, and that'll just get confusing. but I will be sticking to italicizing for thoughts or phone conversations.

thanks for reading and commenting!

[hana_yo]

New reader here =D
I only stumbled on this Fic, because it said “minor QMi” and I debated with myself if I should read it or not, because I usually don't read girlxboy-pairings. But it's HenBer *____* I think it's the only hetero-pairing I'm willingly reading, because Amber is gorgeous <3 (Henry is on my bias-list as well, but I'm mostly reading Henwook when it comes to him and a partner).
Well, QMi is my OTP and therefore I was so happy they met each other and Kyu seems to be interested *kekekek*
I'm also curious how Amber will survive and how Henry finds out about her ö___Ö I bet Sungmin falls for her first xD
I really enjoy this story ^^ Please keep it up =)

PS: I think the “Chinese parts” are fine without italicization. It would be to confusing otherwise .

[written_notes]

just to let you know, the QMi will be pretty minor, though there might be more development on their part later in the fic. but this will mostly be about Henber, whom I'm glad you like too!

I think it's interesting that most fans seem to be okay with shipping Amber with anyone - I think she's just that cool :D

thanks for reading and commenting, and your input on the italicizing, I won't be italicizing different language conversations so as not to be confusing!

[theblobmaster]

I love this verse it's so entertaining XD Can't wait for more

[written_notes]

wow, I'm glad you're enjoying it!

thanks for reading and commenting!