I was going to sleep but I saw that you posted this on miracle, so I went to read it!
I've been a silent reader all this while, and I have to say, I'm very intrigued by this fic's plot! Normally, I don't read these kinds of fics, but yours just pulled me in! (:
Hahaha, I love Jongwoon. Where is your brain going, eh? 8D
I don't usually read these kind of stories, but this is really interesting. Oh, I've been a silent reader until now ^^" Just got the LJ account. Can't for the update.
I see. that's funny, because I realise I normally write AU fanfics, mostly because I'm afraid of writing illogically or having them out of character in real life.
Omg I was honestly just thinking about this story like yesterday or the day before wondering when you'd post an update and voila! Here's that update. X3
I loved it. It's great that everything worked out and now they just gotta take down the bad dude and be free foreverandeveramen. ^^
Teh. It's cool. At least I remembered the story this time! XD (That's what I'm happy about. >.<)
Hmmm... I guess the girls summoning Yoochun to them, quickly believing that he and the rest of the boys would help them, Yoochun quickly coming up with a way to get out of there, and Changmin quickly believing the girls WAS a lil easy and rushed, but it played out nicely. And I guess you'd have to rush it a little since you already know how many chapters you're doing and it wouldn't have made any sense if you'd let them be stupid for half of the chapter wondering how they were gonna get out and finally make them realize it halfway through the next chapter. (Sorry if I'm not exactly making any sense. My mind is a bit on the hyper side and I tend not to make any sense when I'm hyper. ^^;) Let's just say it was just fine the way it was and that any other way would have just made it longer and a lil boring. ;P
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I've been a silent reader all this while, and I have to say, I'm very intrigued by this fic's plot! Normally, I don't read these kinds of fics, but yours just pulled me in! (:
Hahaha, I love Jongwoon. Where is your brain going, eh? 8D
Can't wait to read your next update! :D
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Jongwoon's thinking naughty thoughts - shame on him!
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I loved it. It's great that everything worked out and now they just gotta take down the bad dude and be free foreverandeveramen. ^^
Can't wait for the next update! ;P
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everything worked out - though do you think maybe it was too easy, the way I wrote it? I've been wondering...
thanks for commenting, as always!
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Hmmm... I guess the girls summoning Yoochun to them, quickly believing that he and the rest of the boys would help them, Yoochun quickly coming up with a way to get out of there, and Changmin quickly believing the girls WAS a lil easy and rushed, but it played out nicely. And I guess you'd have to rush it a little since you already know how many chapters you're doing and it wouldn't have made any sense if you'd let them be stupid for half of the chapter wondering how they were gonna get out and finally make them realize it halfway through the next chapter. (Sorry if I'm not exactly making any sense. My mind is a bit on the hyper side and I tend not to make any sense when I'm hyper. ^^;) Let's just say it was just fine the way it was and that any other way would have just made it longer and a lil boring. ;P
You're welcoe~ As always. ^^
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the girls have such cool powers! :D
Can't wait for the rest.
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I can't wait to see where this will go~
Thanks for writing~ (Oh, and add me?)
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thanks for commenting! when you say add you, does that mean I go to your journal and put a friend request or something like that? *is a n00b*
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And I'm sure you'll write well. I'm fine with anything you write, because it's hard to go wrong~ ^^
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