Comments | writinguachorus: [Ryan/Brendon] We Are Immune.

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[Ryan/Brendon] We Are Immune.

Mar 07, 2009 21:10

We Are Immune [~900 words] ||shattered_ink || PG-13 [swearing & serious themes] ||
Gen OR Ryan/Brendon. [and then it turns into a game of SPOT THE FBR MEMBER!]
Summary: In which bandom meets rehab. ANGST ENSUES.
Disclaimer: I don't own them; this never happened. The clinic's name is partially stolen from the band Sunny Day Real Estate. The title was just stolen ( Read more... )

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Comments 15

poprockbomber March 12 2009, 01:04:57 UTC

Awww!
This was tragically beautiful.
Holy shit, I loved it.
And the last line, about killed me with the beauty of it, and the innocence of it as well.
Good job.

shattered_ink March 12 2009, 01:13:51 UTC

:D
Thank you so much!
I'm glad the ending worked for you, especially.
<33

poprockbomber March 12 2009, 01:35:59 UTC

What makes you say that?

shattered_ink March 12 2009, 02:01:42 UTC

It's just, I'm usually a really fluffy, happy-ending kind of person,
So I tried not to overdo this not-so-happy ending
And I hoped it would be believable without being soap-opera-like.
So I'm really glad you liked it!
:D

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samii_sunshinee March 12 2009, 01:50:30 UTC

I love how Brendon at the end said he was taking a nap - just like he tried to convince himself that Ryan was. It was adorable, but ver ver sad.
However, the angst was very angsty and it was beautifully written and wow, I just love it.
The way Brendon asks if staying with Ryan was what a friend would do made my heart swell.
<3
I love your writing.

shattered_ink March 12 2009, 02:03:31 UTC

Oh, wow, thank you so much!
These are pretty much the best compliments I could ever receive, so really, thank you.
Glad you liked it! :D
<33

ryden_addictic March 12 2009, 03:01:48 UTC

that was broken nd twisted but i loved it anyway.
thank you i needed something like this to wake me up.

shattered_ink March 12 2009, 17:21:37 UTC

Haha, thank you!
<3

reflectedintv March 12 2009, 16:45:54 UTC

*scrapes jaw of the ground*
Oh my god That was really
fantastic. Probably one of the
greatest I've stories I've ever
read. I bow down to you oh great
one.

shattered_ink March 12 2009, 17:23:02 UTC

:D
Wow, thank you so much!
I bow to your tremendous kindness!
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hesmagicandmyth March 13 2009, 06:09:55 UTC

I hate stories where someone dies. I just can't handle them.
But they're always so beautiful.

This one is no different.

It's beaufitul, but it still hurts.

-Seda*
:(

shattered_ink March 13 2009, 17:33:16 UTC

Aww, thank you & I'm sorry.
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