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Quite The Party

Sep 26, 2006 14:58

Title: Quite The Party
Written for: fanfic100
Fandom: Gilmore Girls
Character(s): Jess Mariano (Luke Danes)
Prompt: 005. Outsides.
Word Count: 1106
Rating: PG
Summary: There’s a wedding coming up, a long awaited visit is about to happen and then there’s a protective brother.
Author's Notes: Sort of a sequel to Gone Fishing, about a year or so later. Sort of ( Read more... )

jess mariano, fanfic, quite the party, luke danes, gilmore girls, fanfic100

Comments 17

torrential_rain September 26 2006, 23:41:09 UTC

Aw that was perfect. I love that Jess is happy in a different relationship and that he wants to be the protective big brother! And I love that L/L are getting married. And I pretty much love how its NOT anything like GG today because that means that its good GG.

'sigh' 500 cups of coffee to you.

hallon02 September 27 2006, 03:56:06 UTC

Thank you! :D Though it's a bit sad that it's a good thing when it's not like GG... I miss the show. :(

lol, could I trade the coffee for tea? ;)

torrential_rain September 28 2006, 17:32:56 UTC

Yeah I know what you mean. I must say, though, I was more impressed with the dialogue in the premiere than I thought I would be. I hate everything about the storyline right now, but I laughed...which I wasn't expecting. :shrugs:

Of course you can, and I'll even throw in a Jess-berry smoothie. ;)

hallon02 September 28 2006, 19:46:53 UTC

Yeah, it wasn't at all as bad as I thought it would be. Though the non-communicative R/L relationship makes me cringe everytime, and Rory still majorly annoys me... Hmm...I think I found the reason I gave Jess a new girlfriend here. ;)

*grins* Thank you! That'll make a great night snack. :D

Thread 5

adinarj September 27 2006, 01:52:49 UTC

Aw. What a great scene with Jess and Luke. I love that you brought it back to fishing, and right before the wedding, too--what a great place for Luke's bachelor party! I'm glad that Jess found happiness. And he's really sweet about his little sister--so cute! I wrote a fic about Jess being the big brother--it's in the process of being edited (by me) now. I'll link when it's up!

Great job, as always!

hallon02 September 27 2006, 03:58:52 UTC

Thank you! :D lol, I had to do something with the fishing. ;)

Oh, fic link! *grins*

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hallon02 September 27 2006, 07:24:39 UTC

I've thought of that... Just have to figure out the story in between. ;) Keep an eye out for more. :D

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hallon02 September 28 2006, 03:15:56 UTC

*grins* ;)

Thread 6

kultiras October 2 2006, 04:53:51 UTC

So are you going to add this later on in This Crazy World?

I love the fact that Jess brings Luke to the lake for his bachelor party and then proceeds to pretend like he doesn't care. So in character, so perfect. =)

hallon02 October 2 2006, 06:04:02 UTC

Yup, that's the plan. It's in the folder marked as Part # at the moment. ;)

Thank you. lol, that's what makes it so fun to write Jess. :D

muffin_sue April 3 2007, 23:04:05 UTC

God If I could right like ths ...

hallon02 April 4 2007, 10:53:09 UTC

Thank you. :p

At the moment I wish I could too... :/