What If We Went To Italy (The Libaremente Remix)

[kallistei]

Title: What If We Went To Italy (The Libaremente Remix)
Pairing: Jaejoong/Yunho
Rating: Mature
Word Count: 2355
Summary: Yunho's bride-to-be is beautiful, young and shy - everything she's meant to be and nothing that Yunho wants.
Author's Notes: Written for remixredux09, based on What If We Went To Italy by mormorando. Thanks to ranalore and sleepish for betaing.

Comments

[moon1084]

i liked this but i was a bit confused with the last line. does that mean he ended up leaving, cuz i remember in the old version he stays.

[moon1084]

i want to say that it was all a dream to yunho but i am not sure!

[kallistei]

Not quite! But something along those lines.

[daemon_angelus]

oh i like this. immensely.
i'm just a sap for the whole meeting-this-random-stranger-who-is-really-the-love-of-my-life thing. :D plus jaejoong owns a vineyard. and i like your descriptions alot.

the ending is ambiguous and gosh, it makes me wonder if yunho's gonna stay (think he is! :D) or not but hey, that's all part of the fun ♥

nice work, memming! (:

[kallistei]

I'm glad you liked it! :) I'm not sure if Yunho has a choice, though...

[labobo93]

Holy goodness, what did I just read.
That was really, really good.
The ending... creepy?

[kallistei]

Thanks! And maybe just a little.

[illuminations]

Do you know how weird/awkward it is to write a comment where I'm supposed to pretend like I don't know who the anon is when in fact, I KNOW VERY MUCH AND IN FACT TOLD HER WHICH FIC OF MINE TO REMIX, because it is very weird/awkward!

I really like this version. Mine was too flighty and fanciful and poofy or whatever, and this is grounded really nicely. Well.. except for... the last part... BUT IT'S FINE BECAUSE I SUPPORT JAEJOONG 100% IN HIS BOY-COLLECTING ENDEAVORS. JAEJOONG'S TALENT FOR SEDUCTION SHOULD NOT BE WASTED.

:D :D :D

[kallistei]

You suck at pretending and a simple thank you would have been nice >:

:| Boy-collecting fixes all wrongs!

[illuminations]

dead, but the fic wasn't for me.

and then jaejoong ropes yunho in to help get changmin.

[kallistei]

Whatever.

I don't think Yunho requires roping. He might enjoy it, though :|

[livesmiling]

oh jeebumz this was so pretty.

[kallistei]

:) Thanks!