Five Ways To Say Goodnight: Way 2 (Repackage Version)

[kallistei]

Title: Five Ways To Say Goodnight: Way 2 (Repackage Version)
Pairing: Jaejoong/Yunho
Rating: Explicit
Summary: "If I say my ass hurts from falling on it so much, will you rub that too?"
Author's Notes: My muses are pushy. ranalore betaed.

Comments

[kelseypaige]

!!!! you have just made me a very happy girl, ma'am. ♥ oh the yunho and the jaejoong. so good together. asjkgrsats thank youuu ♥ :-*

[kallistei]

&hearts My Yunho is so ridiculously in love. Sigh.

[kelseypaige]

it's how it should be, bb ;))

[kallistei]

Well, of course. It's just sometimes a little overwhelming. *eyes Yunho!muse*

[314159]

you wrote jaeho! ♥ i love your writing! i have to admit that i've shied away from many of your stories just because the only pairings i really follow are jaeho and yoosu. anyway, this was really good and i hope you write more jaeho *___* their interaction in this is spot on. the smut was hot, obviously, but then there were things like this:

It's Yunho's turn to double over with laughter, his hand clutching at Jaejoong's leg. “Oh god,” he chokes out between spasms of giggles, “I can't believe you actually just said that.”

i could totally imagine the two of them acting like that together! so cute. nice job ♥!

[kallistei]

Thank you! (Aw, the other pairings are very worth your love too! *shameless OT5 missionary* ;) )

I'm glad you found it cute as well as hot; that was exactly what I was hoping for. :D

[hay_linny]

yay Jaeho!! As much as I love OT5, sometimes some good old Jaeho is great...though you don't make it old at all, actually very refreshing - especially a Yunho completely in love ^^ Great writing, thanks!

[kallistei]

Thank you!

[shinchul303]

I LIKED that--didn't think it was smutty at all--just sexy and sensual. In fact, just about a perfect balance between the two. A nice change from grunts and slapping skin.

[kallistei]

Thank you! That's a great compliment.

[_happy_as_rain_]

The exaggeratedly longing expression pasted on Yunho's face, something straight out of trashy drama, makes Jaejoong crack up just after.

Why does this remind me ridiculously of Yunho's "honma ni" face after he screwed up on spelling curry and Junsu professed his love to him?

Oh, I loved this too. Nothing big or climatic, just a slice of life. <3 I admit I don't read a lot of your works because of the pairings (I like your friendship!OT5 though) but when I do I'm surprised at how subtle (in a natural way) they are. <3

[kallistei]

Actually most of my 'pairing' fics are friendship more than relationship too, because friendship is my favourite trope.

Thanks!