Comments | writinginct: fic- "In The Dark" Stargate SG-1, NC-17, complete

writinginct

fic- "In The Dark" Stargate SG-1, NC-17, complete

Nov 07, 2008 19:33

Title: In the Dark
Author: CJ aka WritinginCT
Fandom: Stargate SG-1
Pairing/Rating: Jack/Daniel, NC-17
Disclaimer: I don't own the recognizable characters I'm just inspired by them. Hopefully they've had fun playing in my sandbox.
J/D Kinkathon Prompt(s): bottom!Jack, flaccid penis play, surprise meeting at D/s resort, sensory deprivation (of ( Read more... )

genre:slash, pairing:jack_o'neill/daniel_jackson, fandom:stargate_sg-1, cat:prompt response, cat:pwp, char:daniel_jackson

Comments 33

advection November 8 2008, 02:30:05 UTC

Eeeeee! I love this so much. Totally hot, hits gajillions of buttons, and a happy ending -- which I seriously had my doubts about at He pointedly tapped on it three times and turned and left without another word, which, owwwwwwwwch. But they worked it out! And the framing device of the repeated line is lovely.

So glad you wrote!

writinginct November 8 2008, 03:22:05 UTC

This actually started out life as a little porny paragraph about Daniel doing Jack in the dark- then it morphed and mutated itself lol...

I was really torn between leaving it ending at that "three taps" line or not. But I really wanted to use that repeated line for the very end and coupling that with the fact that I think I am fundamentally and completely incapable of writing an unhappy ending I let the boys sort it out in the end.

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

dragojustine November 8 2008, 03:01:46 UTC

Ooooh!

You wrote the flaccid play prompt! May. Way to hit my buttons. I started to try that, and then mostly ended up bummed out about my lack of a live model to practice on and gave it up. So I'm so glad you did. Very very very hot indeed! Yummy.

(his prostrate was stimulated-- I'll take "commonly confused words for $200, Alex!" prostate.)

writinginct November 8 2008, 03:27:49 UTC

Yeah- and flaccid play isn't even one of my personal kinks but I think it fit well within the confines of the story.

But I will say if you ever get the chance to play in a blackout room like that it is SO SO intense.

No live model huh? You are young yet- lots of time to practice!!

And thanks for the typo catch! I hate typos that are real words. The spellchecker doesn't catch those.

starglyph November 8 2008, 22:42:23 UTC

flaccid play prompt! May. Way to hit my buttons. I started to try that

Ooh! Ooh! That was my prompt, and I would love that kink to get some more attention. If there's anything I can do to, um, entice you to write it (live model, or no), I'd be happy to do it. Begging? Would begging help? ;-)

magnavox_23 November 8 2008, 06:32:42 UTC

Delicious! [/uses abstract adjectives to describe desirable fic] :)

writinginct November 8 2008, 20:46:00 UTC

Thanks! Jack and Daniel are just yummy!! And neeked Jack and Daniel are just well... ;)

melayneseahawk November 8 2008, 11:37:12 UTC

Guh.

bottom!Jack was my prompt, and I loved the way you used it here. Now I have something happy to think about at work today. :)

writinginct November 8 2008, 20:48:12 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed it! It seems like all my little J/D porny plot bunnies lately are bottom!Jack lmao

^_^

sidlj November 8 2008, 17:43:38 UTC

Some nice kinks there! The darkness, and the no touching, not to mention the actual prompts. I'm glad you decided to give them their happy ending. :-)

writinginct November 8 2008, 20:49:40 UTC

Blackout play is hot in r/l and I could see Daniel enjoying the sensuality of it. I had fun with this one- glad you enjoyed it!!