The Other Heart

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Comments

[darnaguen]

Awwh, that was gorgeous and quite painful too.

One tiny little nitpick, tho': it was "Peas in a pod, darlin'".

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Thank you! And I appreciate the nitpick too...it's been awhile since I watched that scene and I couldn't remember which endearment he used. I'll edit it in :)

[kenton_bomb]

That was wonderful, yet sad :(

Well done.

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Thanks for the comment!

[reneeks]

Wonderful! I really enjoyed reading Elizabeth's thoughts, and how you cut off this one:

She would wish this fate on no one, least of all the two men she---

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I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for commenting :)

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Thank you for such a lovely compliment! I wasn't sure if the word repetition would work or not, so I'm glad it did. :)

[fried_flamingo]

I loved this take on that scene and the alternative to how it actually played out, especially the final line. My heart broke too.

I'd love to read a follow up with Jack captaining the Dutchman during the attack on the Endeavour.

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AWE was such a mess that it was never really clear ( at least to me) if Jack would have gone through it or not...but I thought it would be fun to do a take on what might have happened. I'm glad you liked it! I have a couple more ideas surrounding this idea floating in my head and it may actually turn into a prologue for a longer story.