and parts of you were burning

[miscellanium]

Title: And Parts of You were Burning
Author: miscellanium and wantedplantlife
Characters: Sam
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: takes place during 6.22
Warnings: mild horror
Word Count: ~1,360
Notes: Title from Richard Siken's 'You are Jeff'. Conceived immediately after watching the finale; my first time co-writing something! The whole thing, from development to editing

Comments

[false_alexis]

OMG, this. This is amazing. This is terrifying, and deeply unpleasant in many ways, but only the good ways. You really make the second-person present work! And I love the sense of unreality, that each fragment is a person but that they don't have a firm grasp on anything. Lucifer!Sam is the scariest Sam of all. I would quote those four paragraphs back at you, but I have nothing to add, other than that you've got some flawless writing here. Congratulations on being awesome writers!

Extra points for seamless co-authoring.

[miscellanium]

6.22 gave fandom some very rich material with those soul fragments, didn't it? Lucifer!Sam was the most fun to fit in, so I'm glad that part worked especially well for you. Thank you very much - from both of us!

[tabaqui]

Ah, man. That's a bit creepy and so heartbreaking and just...the confusion and the fear and the wrongness of it all....

Good, good stuff!

[miscellanium]

Thank you - glad you enjoyed it!

[monicawoe]

Most excellent. I had hoped there would be more than two Sam's for Sam to confront during 6x22. Thanks for this!

[miscellanium]

Glad you enjoyed it! (Very appropriate icon. ;)

[galwithglasses]

This is really good. Good choices on the memories and the flashback to Jess at the beginning and end along with all the yellow-eyes stuff in the middle. I'm going to want to read this again.

[miscellanium]

Thank you! Hope you enjoy it as much the second time around.

[borgmama1of5]

Makes sense that Sam broke into more than 3 pieces.

[miscellanium]

Maybe season 7 will give us more of that :)