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Fanfic: DW/SPN Xover - The First Thanksgiving: Wednesday, 3 of 3 (Jack/Sam)

Nov 22, 2006 03:27

Title: The First Thanksgiving: Wednesday, 3 of 3
Author: eboniorchid
Fandom: Doctor Who/Supernatural Crossover
Characters: Captain Jack Harkness/Sam Winchester
Prompt: Jack/Sam requests over at The 'Captain Jack Sexes Everyone In Every Fandom Ever' Challenge created by sarkastic
Word Count: 3901 total words exactly.
Rating: NC-17 for language and sexuality.
Warnings/ ( Read more... )

fic universe: spn samdom, fandom: supernatural, fandom: torchwood, character: sam winchester, category: slash, fic series: the first thanksgiving, rating: nc-17, !fanfic, kink: spanking, genre: smut!fic, pairing: sam/jack, genre: kink!fic, challenge: mini_nanowrimo, genre: pwp!fic, character: jack harkness, challenge: nanowrimo, kink: bdsm, genre: crossover!fic, fandom: doctor who

Comments 33

missyjack November 22 2006, 09:44:39 UTC

wow. sub!Jack was a total surprise - and a total turn on. And I lvoed how Jack may be a total slut, but you let him still find it a bit hard to ask for what he wants *loves on you*
But even better was top-in-training Sam - boy is a quick learner.
also - shower!sex - yummy.

I'll be in my bunk.

writingbyebonio November 22 2006, 10:21:30 UTC

YAY!

Yeah, sub!Jack is hot! Especially with almost-dom!Sam. Yis.

I'm so glad you liked Jack's minor what-I-want difficulties and top-in-training Sam, because ... yeah ... it's all Jack's fault! And it's sexy.

So glad I'm not the only one who's all ... sex in the shower = WIN!

Enjoy your bunktime!

Thanks for the FB, honey! You rock!

tthjinni November 22 2006, 12:22:55 UTC

*total. brain. meltdown.*

This was... gah. I mean, wow. I wish I had time to leave a full out review of everything I loved about it, but I'm already going to be late for work because I couldn't stop reading at part two...

You captured the 'voice' and essence of Jack so beautifully and I have to seriously commend you for that. The sex scenes were scorching hot and I didn't even realize I would truly enjoy Jack/Sam until I read this. Now I think I'm hoooked.

Very well done.

*makes note to rec this to everyone she knows later today*

writingbyebonio November 22 2006, 16:20:43 UTC

Oh WOW!

What awesome feedback!

I'm so so glad you're digging the Jack/Sam and that you like my characterization of Jack! This is a really fun series to write in.

Thanks for reccing and for a comment that really made me squee!

adafrog November 22 2006, 13:31:41 UTC

Love the kink. Great story.

writingbyebonio November 22 2006, 16:20:56 UTC

Awesome! Thanks!

tiferet November 23 2006, 06:39:39 UTC

Oh, Sammy is SUCH a top. I hadn't thought of him actually being into spanking or sadism, but being in charge and control, HELL YES, and it's so much fun to watch him figure it out.

writingbyebonio November 23 2006, 08:39:15 UTC

Yeah! top!Sammy is so obvious! *g*

Glad you liked it!

Thanks for the feedback!

nixwilliams November 23 2006, 09:05:37 UTC

made. of. awesome.

writingbyebonio November 23 2006, 09:27:29 UTC

LOL! Glad you liked it! Thanks for commenting!

nixwilliams January 17 2007, 12:18:47 UTC

you know, i just read this again, and it's still totally HOT!

writingbyebonio January 17 2007, 16:16:18 UTC

*hee* Geewhiz! Thank you muchly! It's always great to hear that a story is rereadable. I definitely reread my faves a zillion times. *g* Glad you STILL find it hot! XD