Comments | writingbyebonio: Fanfic - SPN: Fix (PG-13, Slash: Sam/Dean)

writingbyebonio

Fanfic - SPN: Fix (PG-13, Slash: Sam/Dean)

Mar 08, 2008 23:31

Title: Fix
Author: eboniorchid
Fandom: Supernatural
Characters: Sam Winchester/Dean Winchester
Prompt: "774-Mystery Theatre" for museteasers. "039-Exhausted" for 100moods, challenge table here. "04-Biting" for 50kinkyways, challenge table here.
Word Count: ~ 865 words.
Rating: PG-13 for mature themes.
Warnings/Spoilers: CHARACTER DEATH! Angst. Dark. Violence. Blood. Kink (biting, sort ( Read more... )

genre: dark!fic, warning: blood, challenge: 100moods, kink: biting, !fanpoetry, character: dean winchester, fandom: supernatural, genre: au!fic, genre: challenge!fic, challenge: museteasers, character: sam winchester, rating: pg-13, pairing: sam/dean, category: slash, !fanfic, genre: angst!fic, genre: kink!fic, genre: established-relationship!fic, genre: wincest!fic, warning: violence, genre: plot!fic, challenge: 50kinkyways, genre: character-death!fic, fic universe: spn pseudo-canon

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Re: a very dark little vignette writingbyebonio March 16 2008, 04:20:35 UTC

Yeah, I'm not so good with the sweet and pretty, heh. I'm glad you like the style and mood, though. When you say you'd like to see me continue this, though, do you mean the story itself or write more in this style?

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Re: a very dark little vignette writingbyebonio April 13 2008, 00:28:25 UTC

Ah ... yes ... well ... I have to say that most of my writing time tends to be devoted to the universes I already have, but I'll certainly keep this piece in mind in case a sequel or prequel for this tickles my muses fancy. :)

trias_cube March 20 2008, 04:24:03 UTC

OMG! Wow! Intense. So tightly packed. The whole piece has a unifying, unique style. Very complex too, kind of like a poem where you have to figure out what's going on. I think I got everything except for one part that I'm unsure about. "there was skin, muscle, and bone bound up together and set against his lips, wet and dripping, a limb spilling what he'd lost, an offering, a command." Is that Sam offering his blood to Dean? At first, I thought it was something more gory, but then this seemed more logical.

writingbyebonio March 20 2008, 19:54:54 UTC

Thank you, darlin'. I'm glad you found it intense and complex as that was very much what I was going for. And yes, that phrase is about Sam offering his blood to Dean. Not too gory, just ... ya know ... bloody. ;)

trias_cube March 20 2008, 20:15:38 UTC

That makes sense, and no that's not that gory. What I had originally thought was the gory thing and now it seems so funny that I thought that. I thought that Sam had broken off Dean's arm and was letting the blood from the arm drip into his mouth! LOL!

writingbyebonio March 20 2008, 20:20:34 UTC

LMAO. Dude ... your brain and my brain just ... aren't so good with fluffy bunny scenarios, eh? That is so wrong and hilarious at the same time! XD

lostandalone22 March 29 2008, 04:11:55 UTC

I really like this. It's very chilling.

writingbyebonio April 13 2008, 00:00:00 UTC

Thanks, hon! Glad you liked it. :)

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writingbyebonio April 13 2008, 03:30:46 UTC

Thank you very much! I do enjoy a good bit of darkness on occasion. Glad you liked it! :)

a_phoenixdragon August 9 2008, 05:18:38 UTC

Damn, I.... DAMN!!!

Sweetie - what you do to me!!

*smishes*

writingbyebonio August 9 2008, 20:34:43 UTC

Why thank you! *bows* So glad you liked it! :D