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writingbyebonio

Fanfic - SPN: Whore Academy - Ch. 5 - Remembering and Forgetting

Jul 05, 2007 17:46

Title: Whore Academy [Evil!Sammy Universe]
Author: eboniorchid
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Chapter Five: Remembering and Forgetting
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( story under the cut )

genre: future!fic, fandom: supernatural, genre: challenge!fic, character: sam winchester, category: slash, kink: orgasm control/denial, rating: nc-17, genre: angst!fic, !fanfic, kink: spanking, kink: manipulation, genre: kink!fic, kink: roleplay, genre: established-relationship!fic, genre: wincest!fic, kink: impact play, warning: violence, genre: dream!fic, genre: plot!fic, kink: domination/submission, kink: exhibitionism, challenge: 50kinkyways, character: ofc, type: multi-chapter, fic universe: spn evil!sammy, kink: humiliation, kink: bdsm, genre: dark!fic, challenge: 100moods, warning: blood, genre: amnesia!fic, challenge: other, character: dean winchester, genre: au!fic, challenge: 365wprompts, genre: hurt/comfort!fic, challenge: sam_slut_a_thon, kink: non-consent, pairing: sam/dean, genre: smut!fic, kink: public sex, kink: threesome/moresome, kink: dubious-consent, kink: service, kink: doubles/twins/clones, character: omc, genre: apocalypse!fic, fic series: whore academy, kink: voyeurism

Comments 64

guardianangel_x July 6 2007, 05:23:06 UTC

Wow... that was fucked up, lol.
Good... but... fucked up! LOLZ

writingbyebonio July 9 2007, 16:36:22 UTC

Well thank you! I'm fairly certain that it was intended to be fucked up, so ... I'm glad that came through, but that you found it "good" anyway. Thanks for the feedback!

merihn July 6 2007, 05:50:20 UTC

Um... I'll admit I don't really know what to say here. I can't say that I actually enjoyed it... but your writing is really fantastic. Really. But... it was way too fucked up and sick for me to actually enjoy.

I hope you don't take that badly, because it's not about your writing, not in anyway, but the subject matter. I... don't get off on the punishment, master/slave thing... or on pain... so...

But really, your writing is brilliant and you did such a good job with this. It was fucked up.

&hearrts; ♥ ♥

Well, I said almost everything in my e-mails... merihn July 6 2007, 10:41:21 UTC

But I can't *not* leave a comment. I'm like merihn here - I adore the writing, but it's not my kink. The whole thing makes me incredibly sad. So much suffering.

More in e-mail, and again, you're so talented!

Yours
~L

Re: Well, I said almost everything in my e-mails... writingbyebonio July 9 2007, 16:44:18 UTC

You're allowed to be sad and the brutality of the situation does cause deep suffering. It was never my intention for anyone to ignore that. If it doesn't hit your kink buttons, then that is okay. No worries. I do always appreciate you suffering through my pieces, though, and offering such intriguing feedback.

♥
The Evil Author

writingbyebonio July 9 2007, 16:42:29 UTC

Oh you're absolutely allowed to not enjoy it, but I'm glad you found the writing well-done. It is a very fucked up situation and the audience is meant to feel the some of its brutality, so ... if that's what struck you the hardest, that is a-okay. Thanks so much for the feedback and, really, for reading despite this not being your thing. (And just so you know, I will still adore you even if you don't read my stuff. I very much know it's not for everyone.)

Thread 6

aesvir July 6 2007, 09:59:24 UTC

Sam asking Dean to trust him adds that extra layer of mind-fuck.

writingbyebonio July 9 2007, 16:45:27 UTC

It does, doesn't it? It's kind of a question about whether there's actual tenderness there or just more manipulation, no? Thanks for reading and commenting! :)

missyjack July 6 2007, 11:42:47 UTC

It's hard to sum up all my reactions to this in one comment (but here goes). AS always what stands out for me is the emotional dimension entwined with the power dynamic. There is the aspect of all this that I find so hot, but it has a greater impact than only that because of the emotional resonance. And the whole Sam/notquiteSam/Dean dynamic is just brilliant.

And on top of all that there is a fluidity and poerty in your writing that enhances the whole mood, that really takes it into this sort of dream space.

writingbyebonio July 9 2007, 16:50:53 UTC

Thank you so much for your nuanced feedback, as always. I'm glad the layers of emotion impacted you, even beyond the physicality of things. The student!Sam-teacher!Sam-Dean thing was such an interesting area to explore, so I'm glad you thought it well done. I love all the speculation about who's who and what's what. :) And then, your note about the poetics of things? Thank you, really. These pieces kill me every time I write them, so I'm always glad to know when they flow well.

♥ for MJ 4eva,
~D

ge55woo July 6 2007, 11:57:38 UTC

i was so excited when i saw you posted, and it really lived up to expectations! extremely hot and great character development

writingbyebonio July 9 2007, 16:53:22 UTC

Oh thank you so so much! I'm always glad to know that people are excited about this series and even more glad when they feel the read is worth it. It's great to hear that the hotness and the character development both came through and I appreciate your feedback! :D