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Fanfic - SPN: Leaves, Stones, Water, and Blood (PG-13, Gen: Sam)

May 16, 2007 11:35

Title: Leaves, Stones, Water, and Blood
Author: eboniorchid
Fandom: Supernatural (vaguely crossed over with Battlestar Galactica)
Characters: Sam Winchester, mentions of Laura Roslin
Word Count: ~1800 words.
Rating: PG-13 for language.
Warnings/Spoilers: Gen. Angst. Crossover. Character study. Plot. RPG-repost. AU after and spoilers through "Heart" (02x17).
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fandom: supernatural, genre: character-study!fic, genre: au!fic, category: gen, character: sam winchester, rating: pg-13, fic universe: dm_rpg, character: laura roslin, !fanfic, genre: angst!fic, fandom: rpg universes, genre: plot!fic, challenge: dramaticmuses, *rpg-repost, fandom: battlestar galactica, genre: crossover!fic

Comments 15

Great start! lovetheguys April 16 2007, 16:25:51 UTC

That was fabulous! I can't wait to see where you're going to take us with this, but I'm very excited to be along for the ride! Whew! Robin

Re: Great start! writingbyebonio April 19 2007, 20:09:48 UTC

Thank you so much! Glad you're liking it so far. :)

jude_91 April 16 2007, 17:45:18 UTC

I loved this! I really can't wait to read more.

writingbyebonio April 19 2007, 20:10:27 UTC

Thank you! Glad you're excited for more. :)

mre_quecky April 16 2007, 20:29:05 UTC

OMG! I love it already! And this one sentence: "And I don't want these aches in my back from walkin', but I'll keep 'em, 'stead of throwin' away my walkin'."
that is awsome!!! (don't if there is such saying, but it fits like a glove!)

writingbyebonio April 19 2007, 20:11:13 UTC

Awesome! Thank you very much! And yeah, that saying is entirely made up as far as I'm aware, but I'm glad you liked it. :)

nyoka April 17 2007, 00:59:27 UTC

This was so intriguing, and you added lovely references to my other obsession, BSG, so for that, you get a hug.

Love the sketch you drew of the woman in the rocker; and I enjoyed listening to Sam's POV as he walked the streets, "feeling" out the power, trying to accomplish this mission to save Laura. And of course, Sam's negotiations with the healer...a nice insight to his fears about what he is/will become...and how all dealmaking comes in shades of grey.

And I thought this was lovely description of the intersection of memory and forgetting:

Too often, he was wholly disappointed, even after those moments when a piece of real and weighty tradition was set in front of him. So much confusion and falsehood was mixed in with every strand of truth until he wondered how these little enclaves had survived this long, half-dabbling in things they only understood well enough to get themselves hurt. There must have been remnants of protective egregores left by those who really knew the old ways, elsewise half the city would likely be left in ( ... )

writingbyebonio April 19 2007, 20:16:44 UTC

Thank you! BSG is a very new fandom for me, so I'm glad you liked the tidbits here. It's really good to hear that the OC was interesting and Sam's interactions with her were insightful and intriguing. I think your comment on the quoted paragraph is so beautifully phrased. I was definitely aiming for something there, but I like how you describe it.

And I always appreciate your awesomely detailed feedback.

Different angels3 April 17 2007, 01:22:13 UTC

I liked it. I haven't been able to catch BS since middle of this season. Damn work to hell.

Re: Different writingbyebonio April 19 2007, 20:18:00 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. And actually I only recently got into BSG, so you've probably still seen more than me. :)