[POTC challenge fic] - "Flee:The Dark" - 1/1 - rated R

[writing_samsara]

Title: "Flee: The Dark”
Fandom: Pirates of the Caribbean
Spoilers: Post (my hypothetical) AWE
Pairing: Jack/Elizabeth, a touch of Will/Elizabeth by implication
Rating: R (violence, sexual innuendo, explicit language)
Word Count: 9,303
Disclaimer: I don't own POTC or any of the people in it. They belong to Disney. Would that I was that rich....

Comments

[fried_flamingo]

Amazing! Another triumph (you even had me shipping Will/Elizabeth at the end there). And as for Dark!Jack...GUH!

Also this exchange:

"An eye for an eye, love. Sao must have taught you that.”

“Yes, and revenge is a dish best served cold, isn’t it?”

“Served in shackles to the sea if it’s from your kitchen.”

Wow talk about punch to the gut!

[writing_samsara]

Thanks so much for reading, and for the wonderful comments! It really keeps me motivated to know that there are readers out there enjoying my work. :)

I'm so glad that the Will and Lizzie bit worked for you, as I find it a bit challenging to write them. And oh yes, Jack and Lizzie can be quite acerbic when they want to. ;)

Thanks again!

[writing_samsara]

Thanks so much, love! Your icons really added another level as well. ;) *squish*

[luffing]

This is magnificent! You are fast becoming my favourite writer... I've gone back recently and read all your other "challenge" fics, while waiting for "Sailing" to appear on my screen (heh).

You have such an engaging writing style, it just sucks me in, and always leaves me going "Dammit, I wish that was about 50 pages longer, I don't want to STOP READING!!"