Poem

[writetothebones]

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Last night at a party,
With music blaring from the speakers on a bookshelf
And conversation from the small crowd of people
Filling the background,
My friend tells me he likes me.
He is drunk off cheap beer

Comments

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[mrbigcdx]

I like it. Your poem touches upon this universal experience everyone seems to have throughout life --- whether it be from your friend's perspective or yours. I can definitely relate to it all. I wrote a couple of poems myself this past month after being in a similar situation, albeit something more akin to your friend's. They're in my LiveJournal, perhaps you've already read them.

As I tell all my friends with sparse LJs: get writing! And the vampires? Don't be a hater ;-) ...err I mean I already got the garlic strung around my neck.

See ya in Bing!