[team two] untitled

Nov 26, 2024 22:20

short, unfinished hokushin drabble. 705 words.

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fandom: sixtones, *team two, love ranger: elindar

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damagea December 3 2024, 12:28:47 UTC

AAAAAAAA this was so cute AND kind of HOT at the same time with all the teasing!!!!!! Like Hokuto being all nervous and overthinking everything while Shintaro’s just out here casually being perfect boyfriend material???? The effort Shintaro put into the pasta AND the wine???? THE FANCY SETTING??? It’s giving ROMANCE - we all understand that!!!!🤩

That funny and playful banter of theirs was EVERYTHING and their chemistry felt so natural and warm, so well done darling!!!! The brushed fingers, the teasing, the wine-fueled HONESTY XDDD Ahahahaaa this kind of stuff is just peak slow-burn but also rewarding slow-burn because we’re getting all these little glimpses of something more 8))))!!!

And I just still want to compliment how you built Hokuto's character in this fic because he's kind of a poor baby when he's just hoping and hoping secretly!!!😅 But then that little moment at the end!!! ”Yeah? Is that a bad thing?” LIKE HELLOOOO YOU CAN'T END IT THERE I MEAN C'MOOOON that's just cruel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XDDD

Basically I LIKE this a lot ( ... )

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