[team two] not a coffee date

Mar 24, 2024 14:56

some continuation to my single dad!AU again

Hokuto, Shintaro (+ Jesse), PG, ~2000 words

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fandom: sixtones, *team two, love ranger: elindar

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damagea March 24 2024, 18:41:19 UTC

It's just soooo gooooood and I love the flow in this!!! Your writing in this story is just soooo nice to read, it feels like a real book or a TV series!🤩

Hokuto is just SO CUTE when he's being unsure and shy :''') But also a bit DAIJUTANELI like... how about YOU send YOURSELF a message to guy you're interested in??? XD But then Shintaro asked him and awwwww CUUUTE. Also, nice detail about the dog sticker because OF COURSE Shintaro would use such stickers!!!😙

I laughed at Hokuto opting for normal clothes that are usually reserved for work lolololol XD Certain details about these characters never stop being funny! Also, nice details about the cafés - I KNOW THE FEELING when there are only boring chains in suburban areas!!! I'm actually interested in if you thought about any specific area here when writing this??👀 Are they even in Tokyo, I suppose so??

AND THEN THEY GET TO MEET JESSE who owns a café and is LOUD and has very... loud clothing as well XD I LOVE HIM, and I just love having other guys doing cameos in AU fics lolllll me being a ( ... )

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rin_aokuro March 27 2024, 20:17:43 UTC

Have I already mentioned that I LOVE this au!! 🥰

Poor Hokuto, waiting for Shintaro's message so long! It's so relatable somehow, the way he keeps checking the chat and wondering if he should write something. 🥲 He was so tired and yet OF COURSE he would immediately go whenever Shintaro asked him to go! XD

And then POOR HIM AGAIN for wanting to dress into the kind of clothes he LIKES but then ending up choosing the boring normie clothes. XDD Denim, black, white, nothing too loud or eccentric. I mean, this man would be hot even wearing a black trash bag, but still...his eccentric style is actually growing on me, so. Can't wait for the day he gets to just wear whatever he likes!

He watched as Shintaro veered the car out of the station area, and thought to himself that someone driving shouldn’t have been as attractive as it was to him. HAHAHA OH HOKUTO DARLING WE KNOW. We. Know.

“No, not at all,” Shintaro said right away, sounding easy-going.  I can HEAR his voice in my ears you know. 😭❤️ That's our Shintaro. Cool and chipper! And then ( ... )

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