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Say Hello In This Cafe - The Devil Wears Prada - Miranda/Andy

Mar 05, 2012 18:07

Title: Say Hello In This Cafe
Fandom: The Devil Wears Prada
Rating: PG
Pairings/Characters: Miranda/Andy, Caroline, Cassidy
Prompt: Written for damelola from her prompt 'Andy is a barista, Miranda is the incognito famous novelist writing her novel in Andy's coffee shop.' which she prompted roughly a million years ago.
Summary: Miranda found her thoughts, ( Read more... )

character: miranda priestly, pairing: miranda/andy, character: cassidy priestly, character: andy sachs, character: caroline priestly, fandom: devil wears prada

Comments 29

jah728 March 5 2012, 23:44:49 UTC

Wonderful. I loved how persistent Andy was. Well done.
Thanks for the read.

steampunky March 6 2012, 00:14:59 UTC

Oh my word!! That was brilliant! I adored the Castle references, and the sweet build up to the beginnings of a relationship. Loved it.

medora_macd March 6 2012, 00:52:35 UTC

Absolutely awesome. Very true characterizations, the slow but steady growth of a special relationship, snappy dialogue. I love the idea of Andy the barista as a muse/editor, fostering the gifts of others. May I hope that you might find the time and inclination to show us what Miranda inspires in Andy as a writer? Thank you so much for sharing this with us.

summitsw March 6 2012, 01:04:00 UTC

That was wonderful, a sweet, steady love story. I really liked the way you allowed their relationship to build, and that the twins were able to pick up on Miranda's feelings for Andy. The two dedications were lovely. I also loved the tie in with Castle, and the 'muses'.

jazwriter March 6 2012, 01:08:47 UTC

Great job! I cringed at just how cruel Miranda was to Andy at times--as if I were watching her kick the little, itty-bitty, tail-wagging-a-mile-a-minute puppy...awwwww! Poor Andy! I liked that Miranda felt back but could think of nothing to say to make the situation better. I like that, despite her best intentions, Miranda ends up giving in to her curiosity and questioning Andy on why she helps others but has not submitted her own book for publication. And their conversation at two in the morning after Andy has just read the book is precious and oh-so-in-character. The story was realistic, romantic, and entertaining. Thank you for the great story. If you hadn't noticed, I really enjoyed it.

~Jazzy