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The smut was incredible. Shower scene & Ichi topping Ren at the same time was OMG so so hot!
I totally love how you had Ichigo so conflicted throughout most of the chapter over his emotions for Renji too. Also liked how you had everyone's characterisations down so well, especially Grimm and Aizen, and of course our pair of lovers. ^^
Looking forward to wrapping up the case and how their relationship develops. =D
:D So very glad you liked it! I'm always so happy when the two of them come up with overlapping smexy scenes like this...it's a lot of fun to write, so I'm very glad it was fun to read, too.
So glad that you liked that, as well...somehow, Ichigo seems to me like the kind of person who doesn't come to these sorts of realizations easy, and I'm happy you liked the way it played out. I'm totally thrilled that you liked people's characterisations, since I'm always a little worried, since it's an AU piece, about getting them right. :D
Thanks so much for the kind comments! I've already begun work on the next chapter, so more soon...
Another awesome chapter; that shower scenario from Renji was just so damn hot!!! I'm so there with Ichigo that's a damn fine sight to look at (even if its only in my imagination).
Thank you! So glad you liked Renji's shower scene...I just love his dirty thoughts and the fact that he doesn't have any problem sharing about them...it makes for such fun writing! Mmmmm...I'm so glad that it sounds like that came across well...the way these two are, I always end up with these yummy, naughty pictures of them in my mind, and I just love sharing them with others. :D Thanks again for the kind comments!
*blushes massively* I can't tell you how happy it makes me to hear you say that...that's definitely one of the things I work hard on (to try to clearly convey what I 'see' in my head), so I'm thrilled to hear that it's coming through. :DDDDDD Thank you!
I've been on break for quite a bit now and I'd been wondering when I'd see another installment. Fabulous, darling, fabulous.
Ichi tops Renji?! Yessssss. Delicious. I'm also ridiculously giddy that Yoruichi will be getting her way (not that I doubted it). But it's nice to be assured of it, just the same. Bwuahaha.
Yeah, I think that's been a long time in the making, and I was happy they finally got around to it. Very happy you enjoyed it, and that you're looking forward to the boys getting it on for Yoruichi. I'm in the middle of writing it right now, and it's turning out to be even longer than I'd originally anticipated... XD Thanks so much for your great comments!
i love how even while the two lovebirds are in mortal danger, Renji and Ichigo can still find the presence of mind to talk about their sex lives and how much Renji wants Ichigo's cock in him =) =)
And all the time i was reading about them making out at the end i kept thinking that Yoruichi's spying on them via her camera-laden leather jacket!!
Wonderful story with so much plot and heart-pumping excitement!! i like Renji with snotty-Byakuya but the way you write Ichigo and Renji reminds me of how much i like this pairing too!! So honest with each other and so *cough* lively =) =) Going off to read the next chapter now!!
Heh, heh...I'm so glad you liked that part! It was really a bit of a surprise when I first wrote it, but it seemed to be so them somehow...plus, well, I guess it makes sense to talk about things that really matter if you're in danger of dying soon. XD
Oh, that's a good point! I didn't even think about that, but she probably would have gotten a good view, since it probably wasn't even too far from the bed. With everything that happened, I don't know that Ichigo would have had the presence of mind to turn it off...too funny!
Thanks so much, and I'm glad you've been enjoying it! So glad to bring you over to the RenIchi side, if only for a while...I have to admit those are two of the things I like about this couple, as well as the fact that they've always seemed to interact as equals, despite the differences between them, and I really like that. <3
Thanks again for your great comments, and I hope you like the next chapter too!
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The smut was incredible. Shower scene & Ichi topping Ren at the same time was OMG so so hot!
I totally love how you had Ichigo so conflicted throughout most of the chapter over his emotions for Renji too. Also liked how you had everyone's characterisations down so well, especially Grimm and Aizen, and of course our pair of lovers. ^^
Looking forward to wrapping up the case and how their relationship develops. =D
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So glad that you liked that, as well...somehow, Ichigo seems to me like the kind of person who doesn't come to these sorts of realizations easy, and I'm happy you liked the way it played out. I'm totally thrilled that you liked people's characterisations, since I'm always a little worried, since it's an AU piece, about getting them right. :D
Thanks so much for the kind comments! I've already begun work on the next chapter, so more soon...
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Ichi tops Renji?! Yessssss. Delicious. I'm also ridiculously giddy that Yoruichi will be getting her way (not that I doubted it). But it's nice to be assured of it, just the same. Bwuahaha.
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Yeah, I think that's been a long time in the making, and I was happy they finally got around to it. Very happy you enjoyed it, and that you're looking forward to the boys getting it on for Yoruichi. I'm in the middle of writing it right now, and it's turning out to be even longer than I'd originally anticipated... XD Thanks so much for your great comments!
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And all the time i was reading about them making out at the end i kept thinking that Yoruichi's spying on them via her camera-laden leather jacket!!
Wonderful story with so much plot and heart-pumping excitement!! i like Renji with snotty-Byakuya but the way you write Ichigo and Renji reminds me of how much i like this pairing too!! So honest with each other and so *cough* lively =) =) Going off to read the next chapter now!!
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Oh, that's a good point! I didn't even think about that, but she probably would have gotten a good view, since it probably wasn't even too far from the bed. With everything that happened, I don't know that Ichigo would have had the presence of mind to turn it off...too funny!
Thanks so much, and I'm glad you've been enjoying it! So glad to bring you over to the RenIchi side, if only for a while...I have to admit those are two of the things I like about this couple, as well as the fact that they've always seemed to interact as equals, despite the differences between them, and I really like that. <3
Thanks again for your great comments, and I hope you like the next chapter too!
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