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writerx75

In the Red, chapter 3, part 2

May 14, 2011 17:38

Usual disclaimers: I don't own these characters and don't make any money for these writings; I'm just creating these stories to entertain myself and (hopefully) you ( Read more... )

abarai renji, fanfiction, kurosaki ichigo, bleach, ichigo, red, yaoi, renichi, in the red, renji

Comments 8

dragon5174 May 14 2011, 19:46:09 UTC

This just keeps getting better. I love Yoruichi's idea, such a bad girl.

writerx75 May 15 2011, 18:22:25 UTC

So glad to hear that you think so. :D Heh, heh...I really do love writing her, she's so much fun. Thanks for commenting!

metallic_efekt May 14 2011, 20:12:45 UTC

Hahahaa! Ichigo called Byakuya a dead fish! That's gotta be one of the funniest things ever. Awsome once again:) And thanks again for the birthday wishes.

writerx75 May 15 2011, 18:24:45 UTC

So glad you liked that...yeah, I've never been a big fan of Byakuya's, and it seems Ichigo shares my sentiments. XD Thanks very much for the kind comments, and you're most welcome!

tylashke May 15 2011, 06:17:42 UTC

Drools... Ichigo laid out on the table and Renji on the chair. Why do I think that Renji won't hesitate to agree to Yoruichi's request? XD

Also, really liked how Ichigo bargained with Byakuya and that he accepted the job 'cos of Rukia's connection with Renji. Looking forward to more!

writerx75 May 15 2011, 18:42:46 UTC

:D Really, these two have been way too much fun to write for this series because the way they like to switch control back and forth. So glad you liked the way it came out. Yeah, I think Ichigo really wasn't considering what Renji might say while he was thinking about his response. I agree with you that I think he's in for a surprise there. XD

I'm very happy you liked that part. I think Ichigo was enjoying it way too much because he knew he had Byakuya at a disadvantage so he could largely dictate terms...unfortunately for him, Yoruichi gave it right back to him later. XD Glad you noticed that part, too...really, when you get down to it, Ichigo pretty much took the job because of Renji. Not that he'd ever admit that, though. XD Thanks so much for the great comments!

Delicious kt_rbfh May 20 2011, 03:59:18 UTC

Ugh. It was masterful. Just wonderful. I finally got around to reading it after fourteen grueling hours of studying and my god, it's just getting good! I'm so excited to see yoruichi get her way. I sincerely hope she does, for then I can die a happy woman.

Re: Delicious writerx75 May 20 2011, 22:30:56 UTC

*blushes* Thank you so much for the great comments! I'm glad it made for a good study break after working so hard, and that you liked it. Heh, heh...well, Yoruichi always seems pretty good at getting her way, so I'm betting she's going to get what she wants this time, too. Stay tuned...