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Valentine drabble - Love Bites

Feb 14, 2012 22:58

How could I resist this prompt, Love Bites, and on Valentine's Day.

My contribution.

Love Bites.

Angel knows he’s going to hell but he can’t stop. He won’t. His arms become a vice, trapping his prey: there’s a torrent of red slipping down his throat, his damnation.

Heart thudding loud in her ears, she thinks she may swoon from the heat of it. His arms ( Read more... )

drabbles, prompt challenge

Comments 8

scribesds February 14 2012, 13:35:03 UTC

Lovely, Ares! I wasn’t sure at first if this was Buffy in Angel’s arms, but then it all became clear. Smashing visual you painted, too - those crushing, vice-like arms? A lot of power in those arms…

ares132006 February 15 2012, 04:41:01 UTC

A lot of power in Buffy's arms too. :)

I confused you at the beginning? Perfect. It was what I was going for.

Glad you liked.

Thank you.

hugs

Ares

ital_gal February 14 2012, 14:03:22 UTC

hot. thanks.

ares132006 February 15 2012, 04:41:45 UTC

Well it is freezing your side of the globe. Glad I warmed you up. :~)))

Thank you.

Ares

leni_ba February 15 2012, 03:11:15 UTC

Absolution is what Buffy is offering. If only he understood.

Great lines, Ares. I loved the visual of this.

ares132006 February 15 2012, 04:45:15 UTC

Thank you. You picked out my favourite lines.

Ares

angelus2hot February 15 2012, 03:59:07 UTC

I love this! Powerful last line!

ares132006 February 15 2012, 04:45:52 UTC

Thank you.

I love your icon btw.

Ares