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discodiva76 October 13 2011, 13:52:29 UTC
*gulps*...oooo heartstrings well and truly tugged.....I feel for Jack more than Daniel on this one, but can understand the dilemma and fear faced by him...

Very glad it had a happy ending......

Deeds xx

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melayneseahawk October 13 2011, 17:47:34 UTC
Then I succeeded! Daniel is not supposed to be a sympathetic character in this. Thank you for reading!

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lil_jei October 14 2011, 03:07:25 UTC
That was so what I wanted and more...that was a great job! I was sad for Jack and annoyed with Daniel and and and was so thankful they got the happier ending both men deserved. Loved it.

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melayneseahawk October 14 2011, 11:34:43 UTC
Good. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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sidlj October 14 2011, 05:25:10 UTC
Out of all the thousands of J/D stories, this one dares to go to a place where Daniel can be reviled for his actions/lack of action.

But how often did we ever see Daniel disgusted and frightened by something? This obviously caused a strong reaction which he really couldn't help. Ah, but he didn't even try, and he was the one who lost out. Jack had Clara; Daniel has been alone.

But now there's another chance! \o/

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melayneseahawk October 14 2011, 11:35:58 UTC
He's still human, after all. Thanks for reading!

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muck_a_luck October 14 2011, 16:48:16 UTC
This was absolutely, insanely, amazingly good! :D

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melayneseahawk October 14 2011, 17:58:56 UTC
Thank you so much!

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ext_839706 November 1 2011, 02:04:53 UTC
yeah, talk about heartbreak!!! omg!

i was riveted. i had no idea where this was going. thank you for writing!

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melayneseahawk November 1 2011, 03:32:11 UTC
Thank you, darling. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

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