Stargate Atlantis -- "Crossed Wires"

[writers_island]

From my September Prompt Me!

wiccanslyr: SGA, Rodney/Carson, John gets jealous, Rodney is oblivious, Carson secretly and evilly enjoys it and tries to make it worse

He didn't know why, but Sheppard seemed almost glum. Even his hair wasn't as energetic as usual.

Comments

[wiccanslyr]

THAT. WAS. AWESOME!

I think this was my favorite part... and he must have missed something, because suddenly Carson was beaming and Sheppard was scowling.

*grin like Carson*

[melayneseahawk]

Yay! I'm so glad it worked.

I was trying to play with the fact that Rodney should be clueless, and yet I still wanted the reader to get what was going on.

[sidlj]

Even his hair wasn't as energetic as usual. :-D

I am given to understand that the hair is a sentient being. Apparently it also is suffering from unrequited love.

[melayneseahawk]

Sounds about right to me...