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ashrayne in writers_ball

Freedom Footsteps

Feb 27, 2010 16:49

Challenge Name: Your POV
Title: Footsteps
Rating: PG
Word Count (optional): 351
Author's Notes (optional): This is my family’s heritage. I did not think I was going to be able to write for this challenge, but as the voting hasn’t been posted yet, I stole some time just now.

( Footsteps )

challenge sixteen: your pov, author: ashrayne

Comments 5

zombie_bandido February 28 2010, 17:41:29 UTC

That was INTENSE! I thought the nazis were coming for the MC D:
This is very well-written. I like it a lot!

ashrayne March 1 2010, 15:49:21 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed it. lol I was going for intense, so yay! Thank you :)

not_quite_queen March 5 2010, 01:10:24 UTC

Yay! I love your writing style. You always capture so much emotion...even when it's the lack-thereof. It's intense, as zombie said, but the indifference of the MC is what captured my attention.

Very well done!

ashrayne March 13 2010, 03:18:12 UTC

Yay! I'm glad you caught the MC's indifference. I don't usually write intending a lack of emotion, but I figured I'd try it, at least.

Thank you bunches :)
And thank you for this community!

not_quite_queen March 13 2010, 22:14:00 UTC

You don't have to thank me for this! >w< I actually kind of feel like I've been neglecting it...I'd like to start doing weekly things again instead of bi-monthly.