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Quest

Dec 20, 2009 00:29

Challenge Name: Read the Script!
Title: Quest
Rating: PG
Word Count (optional): 368
Author's Notes (optional): Oh, my God, it’s short! I wrote a short one! Go, me! Anyway, this is from Travis/Jailbird's POV, for those who haven't read the previous ones. Travis is Sue Ann's love interest, and the other MC of this storyline.

( I hated what he did to her... )

challenge fourteen: read the script!, author: not_quite_queen

Comments 3

zombie_bandido December 20 2009, 09:31:05 UTC

o___O
I really want more.

The only thing I see is that it seems like after "I need someone", it should start a new paragraph.

Poor SueSue T^T

not_quite_queen December 20 2009, 09:35:01 UTC

More is being planned...kinda. Actually, I currently have no clue as to what's going to happen. xD But there will be more.

Yes, poor SueSue. Her puns won't get out of this one.

not_quite_queen December 20 2009, 11:57:17 UTC

*won't get her out of this one.