Cuckoo For Crack Pipes

[classicr0cker]

Challenge Name: They're Grreat!
Title: Cuckoo For Crack Pipes
Rating: R for harsh language
Commercial Mascot Used: Sonny the Cocoa Puffs Bird
Word Count (optional): 282
Author's Notes (optional): I don't know where the hell this came from.

Comments

[nextdrinksonme]

Okay, that was hilarious. It feels so unfinished, though. He returns to his cereal and then....?

[classicr0cker]

I'm sure eventually he'll overdose. You can only live so dangerously until the party life eventually gets the best of you. =]

[nextdrinksonme]

No, no, I mean in this scene. It feels like you cut it off in the middle of the rising action. There's no real resolution to the piece.

[classicr0cker]

It's more of a character study, I guess, than anything. I didn't feel like there was a whole lot left to do with it.

Crazy Bird

[lavericknine]

That bird always did seem hi out of his mind for Coco Puffs. He was kind of creepy sometimes. I kind of wonder what would happen if you actually did feed a bird Coco Puffs.

I never cared for Coco Puffs, maybe because of the crazy bird. I always felt bad for the Trix Rabbit, just let him have some.

Anyway, this is funny. It really seems like Sonny.

Re: Crazy Bird

[classicr0cker]

Haha, thanks.

[ashrayne]

I agree, that was hilarious. I will never, ever look at coco puffs the same way. Who knew they could be used as crack!

Excellent job.

[classicr0cker]

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. =]

[not_quite_queen]

Gah! That was awesome! Well written and hilarious...You should make a Sonny series.

[classicr0cker]

Thanks, but I'd probably just get sued.

[not_quite_queen]

Lol, probably.