Killing Time

Dec 18, 2011 21:22

Title: Killing Time
Chapter: 1/1
Characters/pairings: Clark/Lex, Lana
Ratings: PG-13
Warnings: Mild underage sexual content, Slash
Summary: Sequel to Of Trust and Promises. Lex and Clark decide to wait until Clark is eighteen to be together, but this puts a strain on their friendship, and puts Clark in a difficult position.
A/N: This story is for twinsarein. Cause ( Read more... )

clex, fic: pg-13, smallville

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twinsarein December 19 2011, 05:26:45 UTC
For me? Wow! Thank you. You are so awesome, and the story was amazing. I liked Clark being all casually close with Lana and then getting jealous of Lex doing the same with his bimbo...I mean Jess. *g*

The confrontation in the barn was hot. I love it when our boys get jealous. Poor Lex was trying to be so logical, but it just didn't work in the face of a Clark pout. That kiss at the end was dynamite. Love it when it gets a little rough.

Thank you for dedicating this wonderful story to me. I really enjoyed it.

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writerndisguise December 19 2011, 07:33:15 UTC
Glad you enjoyed it. I just had to write this for you. After I read your comment on the first story, then I went to your journal and saw your "Wishlist," which I thought was so sweet and selfless, so I just had to write this for you. Merry Christmas! :)

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twinsarein December 19 2011, 14:33:37 UTC
Aww, thank you again. I don't know about selfless, though. I love learning more about my online friends, and it's always fun to find out what people do differently than what I'm used to.

You know, I was going to quote my favorite part, but it would be all four paragraphs of that amazing kiss. From Lex biting at Clark's lips to Clark pushing Lex into the barn wall, and from Lex tilting Clark's head up to get at his neck to the description of how Clark looks after the kiss was all just one big GUH for me.

Thank you again for the wonderful story.

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writerndisguise December 19 2011, 14:37:03 UTC
Awww, you're so sweet. And I so rarely write kisses like that. (I usually write more tame ones, and I've only written a PWP once.) So I'm glad it still turned out good. :)

So now I must ask, since I told you my Christmas tradition: What's yours?

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twilighthdfan December 19 2011, 09:16:07 UTC
Aww, this was great. Absolutely love both the boys being jealous. Although I think Lex wouldn't be as okay as seeing Clark with the Captain of the Football team as he thinks.

Such a nice christmas present for twinsarein. And such a nice addition to your last story :D.

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writerndisguise December 19 2011, 14:34:57 UTC
Haha. Yeah, I know. Lex might just arrange for the captain of the football team to have an unfortunate accident... lol.

Also, I very much like how everyone picked up on Lex's jealousy. I could see in my mind how he would be trying to hide it, and I wasn't sure that it still came across as a a reading-between-the-lines kind of thing. I'm glad it did. :)

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megamom2 December 19 2011, 14:37:15 UTC
writerndisguise December 19 2011, 14:39:31 UTC
Yay! I'm so glad when everything I intended with the writing comes through so well! Thanks for the comment! :)

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ctbn60 December 22 2011, 00:51:22 UTC
Very nice story! I'd love a sequel two years down the road. :D

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writerndisguise December 22 2011, 02:04:04 UTC
Thanks! I'll certainly see what I can do! ;)

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jlvsclrk December 23 2011, 09:34:30 UTC
Ooh, now this makes a whole lot of sense to me. Clark _was_ too young back in the day and it would have been hell for them to wait. I love the way the passion broke out in the kiss there. Lovely story!

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writerndisguise December 23 2011, 21:01:47 UTC
Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it! :)

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