I have commited White Collar fic ....

Nov 26, 2010 18:15

Title: Blue Skies
Author: writerjc 
For: shay_renoylds for whitecollarswap challenge community
Rating: PG-13ish
Genre: Gen, h/c, bit of Neal whump.  
Characters/Pairing: No pairings. Neal, Peter, Diana, and Jones.
Warnings/Triggers: None
Spoilers: Very slight spoilers for Vital Signs.
Summary: Neal goes undercover. Peter goes a little crazy. Beta'd by the lovely rabidchild67

It was days like this, cases like this, that sent Peter's blood pressure through the roof. )

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kriadydragon November 30 2010, 06:09:08 UTC
Oh, poor Neal. That was great. Very intense, especially with Peter forced to listen to everything that was happening to Neal over the comm. Loved that almost drowning is what helped Neal make the connection with lilies.

I hope you write more White Collar soon :D

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writerjc December 1 2010, 04:23:18 UTC
Thanks! :) It was lots of fun. :)

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anonymous November 30 2010, 06:33:39 UTC
Wow, I really liked this story.
Making Peter listen in was mean and Drugged!Neal is always a favorite.
I like how Neal referred to Nick and Neal in the third person when drugged, like they were both aliases.
Well done, do more, please.

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writerjc December 1 2010, 04:25:16 UTC
Thanks - I'm so glad you liked it. :) It was fun getting my feet wet in the fandom. Do plan to finish another longer story that I've already started.

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ext_186374 November 30 2010, 06:43:11 UTC
I like it! Gripping writing. Thanks for sharing it.

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writerjc December 1 2010, 04:25:43 UTC
So glad you liked it.:)

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bellalaine November 30 2010, 07:32:27 UTC
This was great! Quick action...and Peter being helpless was good yet painful!

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writerjc December 1 2010, 04:28:23 UTC
Thanks. :) Yes, poor Peter. Is it bad that I enjoyed putting him through that?

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rabidchild November 30 2010, 13:08:50 UTC
Even better on second reading! Wonderfully exciting and tense. Excellent, excellent story.

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writerjc December 1 2010, 04:29:46 UTC
Thank you so much again for the beta AND the suggestions! You made the story better. :)

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