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Compromise (I Remember You Well) 2/4

Mar 26, 2009 18:25

Title: Compromise (I Remember You Well)

Rating: PG-13

Pairing: Dan/Walter

Warnings: AU, post-GN (spoilers for same)

Disclaimer: Sing it with me now!
Alan Moore, he had a book,
E-I-E-I-O!
And in that book, there were hot guys,
E-I-E-I-O!
And I don't own them, so please don't sue,
Here a "don't," there a "sue," everywhere a "don't sue,"
Please don't sue me, ' ( Read more... )

watchmen, fic

Comments 33

fififolle March 26 2009, 22:59:22 UTC

Wow. Jeez. Brilliant. You're not shirking the depth of their relative issues, here, and it's fantastic. I loved it! I just want to hug them both! It was so tense and dramatic *g*

But I won't let you take this. Not this." He sobbed, pressing his forehead between Walter's shoulderblades. "Please, not this."

Damn, what an awesome moment. Dan is a star.
You did a great job of teh hawtsex rrrrrr. :D Lovely and gritty. YUM.

writerbunny March 27 2009, 01:18:38 UTC

Thank you so much!

Damn, what an awesome moment. Dan is a star.

I KNOWWW, isn't he wonderful? He emotes so beautifully, especially in the film. Like in that bit from the B-reel when he's beating the crap out of the thug at Happy Harry's, and he's just sobbing.

Dan: *in tears* WHO KILLED HOLLIS MASON?!
Bunny: DAAAAAAAAAAAAAN, ILU!

So, yeah, glad you liked!

fififolle March 27 2009, 08:00:33 UTC

Oh God, yes. I just read that part in the novel, and OMG, I near died it was so heart-breaking.

Ror: 'meant to comfort you'

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

shadowaria March 26 2009, 23:15:35 UTC

Fabulous! Looking forward to the next part :)

writerbunny March 27 2009, 01:23:37 UTC

Glad you liked it! Hope to deliver soon.

prefiera March 26 2009, 23:32:26 UTC

This was even better than the first chapter. :-D

writerbunny March 27 2009, 01:23:12 UTC

Yay! Glad you think so!

paigerrry March 26 2009, 23:38:21 UTC

DO NOT STOP WRITING. EVER

I was bawling by the end. That was the most beautiful interaction I have seen between those two. You made this thing that they have into real poetry.

writerbunny March 27 2009, 01:22:33 UTC

Wowza. That means a lot, esp. the bit about poetry. I've learned that stream of consciousness is a lot like poetry, mostly in that it's a LOT harder than it looks.

"Oh, I just sit down and write whatever pops into my head! Easy!"
*hours of editing later*
"OMG THIS SUCKS SO MUCH."

I am SO happy it paid off for you. ^_^

super_six_one March 26 2009, 23:49:30 UTC

So v. brilliant; don't ever stop. :P

writerbunny March 27 2009, 01:19:59 UTC

Aw, thanks for saying so. I don't plan on it!