I wanted the first chapter(s) of the sequel to be true to the nature of the story which is Jaebum is a single father and Soohyun is still very much his priority. That Youngjae places importance and priority to Jaebum's son as well.... that he places Soohyun needing his father above his own wants & needs.... and even though Jaebum may be more focused atm on his son being sick.... later realizing what Youngjae did and 'sacrificed' I feel that's what is going to mean the most to Jaebum :-)
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I love it ;; I have been waiting for this and I was so happy when I saw that a new chapter was posted ;; I'm fangirling so hard right now I love this couple so much they are soooo cute >< I love (yeah I love a lot of things about that fic) how Jaebum is so sweet towards Youngjae ~ like opening the door for him, apologizing for the end of the dinner .. Fluff ! I love it :3 Soohyun is the cutest think évier (with 2jae) I'm very sick because I'm studying for my exams and reading this cheered me up >< Can't wait to see what is up next :D
lol. i'm so ocd & have a perfectionist tendency so that when later i notice i typed something wrong, i'm like must send another message to correct my mistake.
I wrote "the cutest think sink" i felt like I needed to correct it ahah I'm new to livejournal I still haven't explored the options yet I read your fiction for the --th time and I'm still fangirling ahah
AWWWW that makes me happy you reread it! I do apologize though, I'm having a bit of trouble with both the next chapter of this and my other current GOT7 fic... Idk, words are frustrating me/nothing's flowing right. I decided to take a mini-break and try not to force it. I'm sorry :( Hopefully the wait won't be too much longer. I feel badly :(
Despite writing issues for current stories, my creative muse is still being nice to me so I have an idea for a 2jae story and a BAP fic. (Both one-shots.)
Livejournal, I still don't know much about the site tbh lol. Sometimes I swear it hates me, and sometimes it's not too hard to post.
Okay, I'm a huge fan of mama choi. LOL And oohhh the fluttery feelings of a first date~ Youngjae is a darling and Jaebum is sweet. Honestly this whole thing is adorable. I had a Rudolph plushie when I was younger too. I called it Rudy. (as in Ru-dee) xDDD
I spotted a typo. I only mentioned it because you seem like a perfectionist? For your fics. I'm not usually a spelling/grammar nazi etc.. ^^ Comment about grandpa. I’m sure he felt bed afterward.”
Thanks *blushes* Always appreciate the love :) I apologize the next chapter's not going too well atm (actually this and Ch7 of Stupid Cliches are both giving me a bit of a headache/frustration). I did a get a little sidetracked by another potential 2jae story and a BAP fic.... so yay for that, if they actually become a full legit story lol.
And omg thank you! I'm a grammar/spelling nazi (although I really kind of hate that term, we should come up with a better phrase) so I appreciate you pointing that out. *hugs*
You remain flawless Anony! (Though lol I'm just going to assume that you're the same anony.... this message back will be slightly embarrassing if it's another random anony..... which in that case *hello and sorry for my ridiculousness??*)
p.s. jealous of your Rudolph plushie! I didn't have one :(
Awww that's so sweet of you to say. Thank you! I was having issues with the next chapter. I know what I want to happen, it's just getting the words on paper is not always an easy task. I decided to take a mini break from it, but it's not forgotten. I promise! I will try sometime this week and see if I have better luck with Ch3.
Thank you so much though... knowing people are interested and want more is always a nice thing :D
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I wanted the first chapter(s) of the sequel to be true to the nature of the story which is Jaebum is a single father and Soohyun is still very much his priority. That Youngjae places importance and priority to Jaebum's son as well.... that he places Soohyun needing his father above his own wants & needs.... and even though Jaebum may be more focused atm on his son being sick.... later realizing what Youngjae did and 'sacrificed' I feel that's what is going to mean the most to Jaebum :-)
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! Thank you for commenting!
p.s. I still love your icon. Baby Zelo!
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I love (yeah I love a lot of things about that fic) how Jaebum is so sweet towards Youngjae ~ like opening the door for him, apologizing for the end of the dinner .. Fluff ! I love it :3
Soohyun is the cutest think évier (with 2jae)
I'm very sick because I'm studying for my exams and reading this cheered me up ><
Can't wait to see what is up next :D
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fluff is the name of the game with this story. youngjae inspires fluff. 2jae are fluffy. soohyun is adorbs.
btw, sorry to hear that you are sick :((( please get to feeling better! i'm glad this could cheer you up a bit though.
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Sorry French spellchecker ahah
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I'm new to livejournal I still haven't explored the options yet
I read your fiction for the --th time and I'm still fangirling ahah
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Despite writing issues for current stories, my creative muse is still being nice to me so I have an idea for a 2jae story and a BAP fic. (Both one-shots.)
Livejournal, I still don't know much about the site tbh lol. Sometimes I swear it hates me, and sometimes it's not too hard to post.
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I spotted a typo. I only mentioned it because you seem like a perfectionist? For your fics. I'm not usually a spelling/grammar nazi etc.. ^^
Comment about grandpa. I’m sure he felt bed afterward.”
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And omg thank you! I'm a grammar/spelling nazi (although I really kind of hate that term, we should come up with a better phrase) so I appreciate you pointing that out. *hugs*
You remain flawless Anony! (Though lol I'm just going to assume that you're the same anony.... this message back will be slightly embarrassing if it's another random anony..... which in that case *hello and sorry for my ridiculousness??*)
p.s. jealous of your Rudolph plushie! I didn't have one :(
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Thank you so much though... knowing people are interested and want more is always a nice thing :D
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