Smile for Me HirotoxShou 1/2

[write_my_dreams]

Title: Smile for Me
Author: toiunplus 
Pairing: Hiroto x Shou
Genre: Romance, fluff, minor angst
Warning/Disclaimer: Nothing to warn about. I own no one.
Rating: PG
Chapters: 1/2
Summary: Hiroto wants to help Shou get over his insecurities and realize how beautiful he is, but is too shy to confess his feelings.
Author's Comment: The idea for this fic came to me

Comments

[kurrren]

Aw yay you're first A9 fics came so soon! I've been listening to them since like December and you still did a fic before me 8D Naughty thang.. Anywho I've read it a lot and I like it XD
Your master is very pleased *pats head*

[write_my_dreams]

It did. Oh how shameful, you better finish your fic soon then. Oh I know you have, glad you like t :D

Haha I bet you are

[write_my_dreams]

Thanks :) I will, I have to write a story for a friend's birthday but once that's done I'll finish this fic

[evespikey]

If only he had a perfect smile like Kai, the drummer of the GazettE. That man’s smile was beautiful. If Shou had teeth like him, he’d smile all the time.
aw, I know what you mean! Kai is beautiful when he smiles.

“No they’re not. If you had straight teeth then you’d look too perfect since you’d be so beautiful,” Hiroto said, blushing a little.
I don't really ship anyone in A9, but I died from cuteness at that sentance. It's so perfect!

Hiroto chickened out. “I bought a new Dragon Ball game. Do you want to come over and play it after dinner?”
Awww, I don't know why I liked this bit so much but I did anyway. X]

This was nicely written and realistic, with a good mixture of description and dialogue. I liked ^^

[write_my_dreams]

I know, Kai smiling is sooo cute!

I'm new to A9 so I'm picking up pairings, but I've gotten hooked on this one. Aw really? I'm glad you liked it so much.

I enjoyed that line too. Poor Hiroto, trying to tell Shou but is too shy

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it so much

[write_my_dreams]

I don't mind them at all, I just like Shou with his fixed teeth since he smiles A TON more, so I think it's cute to see Shou smiling and laughing a lot

[silveryxdark]

:D Oh, Shou and Hiroto!
Shou IS beautiful, haha. <3 Oh Hirotooo <3 He's so shy and cute, I love him here ^^

[write_my_dreams]

Yes he is :) Aw, thanks. I'm glad you liked him