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blue_thundering in write_away

Survival Island Response!

Aug 08, 2006 12:51

(A good break from studying for exams, lemme tell ya!)

"This is my response to the Survivor Island sixth challenge. If you like my story, please respond. The player with the most responses will win this challenge."

( Hostage Situation )

feature: survivor island, user: blue_thundering

Comments 12

melsmarsh August 8 2006, 16:59:15 UTC

Nice.

blue_thundering August 8 2006, 23:34:22 UTC

Thanks!

good to see you 'round here, B nyarhotep August 8 2006, 21:52:53 UTC

i like the easy interaction between the two cops, very life-like. though, i was looking forward to a grudge match between Engels and Cromwell ("Marxism's Greatest Propagandist VS England's only Military Genius ¡IN THE CAGE! NO HOLDS BARRED!") ;)

Re: good to see you 'round here, B blue_thundering August 8 2006, 23:34:07 UTC

Jason was a fun character to read up on, thanks! Alack, the cage match is in Part IV of The Jason Engels Stories, and with an upper limit of 800 words, there just wasn't enough room to share all of them. :)

tangled web nyarhotep August 9 2006, 03:00:28 UTC

drawing these three together was tough. they don't exactly play well with eachother. methinks JennaF had the right idea in intersecting Viola and Jason through Scott, but for the life of me (without car crashes, hijackings or other devices) i can't figure out how to integrate Thomas

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blue_thundering August 8 2006, 23:32:18 UTC

I like you!

smeddley August 8 2006, 23:07:55 UTC

I love the job you did with the cops, and incorporating all the characters without making them the main characters. Great take on it!

blue_thundering August 8 2006, 23:32:05 UTC

Very cute icon! And thanks! Glad you liked it.

what, no viola jokes? somerled August 9 2006, 11:43:45 UTC

The passenger list sounds skimpy for an airbus, but just about right for a gulfstream. It was cute of you to extend the name choice fun.