This poem comes with a question: I'm fairly pleased with this piece, and want to share it, but it's kind of personal about me and a friend... and I'm worried about how my other friends will recieve it: what should I do?
(I think the last stanza is rough too, so suggestions are appreciated!)
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A sonnet, brought on by the survivor write away challenge )
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I will say that the switch from his black on white to *my* black and white is turning it into a term of endearment, like a pet name.
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