Pronounced Subtlety

[wouldbeashame]

Title: Red Sun By Morning
Author: wouldbeashame 
Beta: captain_vox 
Rating: PG-13
Characters: John, Sarah, Sherlock
Summary: Half the people that know John think he is having hot, kinky sex with his flatmate, Sherlock. The other half think he is having hot kinky sex with his girlfriend, Sarah. Neither of these opinions are true. John only wishes it were that simple.
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Comments

[fantomeq]

Loved it! I'm much more jealous than Sarah. She takes it in stride and manages to join in on the "fun." The multiple kidnapping day was my favorite bit.

[wouldbeashame]

If she's gonna last in their word, she's gotta be a bit flexible. Even if she does like leaving her claim all over John. I think it'll be interesting to see what they do with her character in the next batch of episodes.
I also had a ton of fun writing all the banter in that bit.

[websandwhiskers]

I love the plausibility of this, and they all sound very much like themselves. I wouldn't mind seeing more, though it works tidily enough as it is, and that last image is rather perfect.

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[anonymous]

need to check