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A ficlet.

Apr 14, 2009 01:49

Irredeemable Clark/Bruce fluff with bonus OOC Clark POV, I'm afraid.
Rated mature.
For the latest contrelamontre challenge; has jack-all to do with Easter.

( I'm sitting in my costume, on the edge of Bruce's bed, as if that way it won't actually count. )

fanfic: fluff

Comments 17

hitokaji April 14 2009, 05:21:21 UTC

////I could tell J'onn wanted badly to smack our foreheads together hard enough to dent both////

LOL. Just imagine this makes me giggles! XD
Well-done! I love it.

Thank you for sharing this ne! ^__^

22by7 May 25 2009, 19:54:35 UTC

Hehe, thanks. I want to write about J'onn now, he is SO underrated/underused/underloved.

harmless_one April 14 2009, 11:34:20 UTC

I agree that your Clark is awesomely chatty. It made me giggle several times. I loved this line:

The egg stuck back, unfortunately - right after the Flash remarked that he'd seen a movie like that, once.

Classic, I swear.

Also:

By the time we'd returned to the Watchtower, Bruce had worked up a decent sulk.

Because I adore the idea that Clark sees it as a sulk whereas the rest of us might call it a snarl or something and be worried and/or scared. Go Clark!

But this is my favorite line:

The other point is that there's something peculiarly nasty about seeing an evil alien trying to crawl down your best friend's throat, especially when you've had... somewhat similar thoughts.Because pervy thoughts about Batman should always be three steps removed from the evil alien fight they just had. But, honestly, it just fit seamlessly with the rest of the kind of stream of consciousness thing you had going on and I think you settled very comfortably into this Clark's skin ( ... )

22by7 May 25 2009, 19:55:30 UTC

Late reply, but your comment made me seriously happy. So thanks a lot. Clark POV is a lot of fun to write.

awils1 April 15 2009, 13:17:02 UTC

First off: I don't think this was OOC at all! Gosh, this sounds so much like Clark's `not-panicking!' voice it is uncanny.

Very cute, and the mood swing spanning the time from showering to bed proves how mercurial Bruce can be in his sulks, which made me smile all the more.

22by7 May 25 2009, 19:56:33 UTC

Thank you!

mithen April 16 2009, 08:34:57 UTC

It's a little pornographic in a slightly kinky way, if you realise that the only part of his body it exposes is his mouth. And the area around it. But mostly the mouth.

*grin* It's very true, isn't it? Kind of draws all the attention there. Love Clark's flustered stream-of-consciousness and how she keeps trying to shy away from thinking too much even though I strongly suspect he knows exactly what this is heading towards. :)

22by7 May 25 2009, 19:56:58 UTC

IT DOES, my god, it does.

Thanks!