Poem-World That Hates You

[worldprotector]

Reading over this poem, I realized I only liked a few lines of it. I decided to post this one because it means something to me. It represents how I viewed the world back then. That is all I can really think of to say right now

Comments

[adenosine_tp]

somehow, this poem really connects with me.
the last line
Just you against this world
That hates you

is really powerful because all along there were only subtle, if no, signs that the world hates you.
it hits right on.

good one. keep going, I enjoy all your poems, even if I don't comment on all of them. :)

[worldprotector]

Thank you for the comment. I am glad you like my poems. Thanks for reading them. I liked the last two lines. That is the main reason I posted the poem because of the last two lines.