Poem- Weight On My Shoulders

[worldprotector]

As I read over this poem, it really made me think, that is why I am posting it

Comments

[adenosine_tp]

wow, I love the first two lines.

Things slowing down, mind closing down
All systems closed, computer overload

They immediately draw the reader into the whole picture- that of a person collapsing, trying to seek respite, because there's just too much to process and filter out.

"an off switch"- I wish I can have that too

[worldprotector]

Thank you for your comment. I am glad that you liked the poem.