Introspection - Substitute

Sep 23, 2005 12:53

Title: Substitute
Archive: Introspective or Sins.
Rating: PG
Summary: Envy could almost understand why Lust was attracted to the human.

Written for kaltia

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dragontrap September 23 2005, 13:40:07 UTC
Ok the first part was actually really cute... And then we get back to Pride stabbing Envy for "wandering off and fraternizing with the enemy"

Ouch, but never cross Pride... I would say I feel sorry for Envy, but he did do it to himself

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zalia October 2 2005, 17:23:52 UTC
Pride is mean -_- But yes, Envy knew what would happen.

Glad you liked it!

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stickmarionette September 24 2005, 12:13:19 UTC
Awww, the first part was fluffy and almost cute, and I feel sorry for Envy now...even though he's a bit of a psychopath. Poor thing is still being used - rather roughly, too - by Pride. Speaking of which, Pride = scary psychopath, but I love him anyway. ^^

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zalia October 2 2005, 17:26:02 UTC
Pride is definately scary >_< I sympathise a bit more with Envy now. He's almost as abused as Lust, just in a different way.

Glad you liked it Stick!!

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ceruleanpure September 26 2005, 04:26:50 UTC
he could almost understand Lust's attraction to the human . . . Pride never looked warm, never looked worried or pained like this one.
Aaah.. Yes. Humans are so fragile. But that what makes us so cute.

<3. Poor Envy... he just wants to be loved.. ^^; Maybe.. ^^; (I'm not about to guess what's going on in any mind of the Sins).

Love the interaction between the Sins at the end... Pride's so evil. He scares me.

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zalia October 2 2005, 17:23:15 UTC
Envy just wants to have Pride all to himself ^^;

Pride is scary -_-

Glad you liked the fic!!

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